Join me in practising Happiness!!! Welcome to the space where the magic of writing Haiku; Poems happens as the words born in my heart flow and quietly spill just like your smile does here in the NOW and I pick it and keep in my heart..
Ah yes, we are all a work in progress lovely haiku ~ love the line 'see my wings….. carol, xxx
wings still in the making is a lovely thought. What a clean and simple poem. I enjoyed this.
This is wonderful. You have such a big message within this simple haiku.
Perfection in brevity!
You must be an apprentice angel! Nice haiku.
do you want to fly over seven seas ... which is very hard ... but you shall have successfully...
Nice and simple..
i like the enrgy and spirit of the soul.....
This is a lovely haiku, Ramesh !!
I can see the twinkle of aspirations in the eyes, beautifully crafted RS:)
This haiku has a reach across Seven sea..beautiful meg!
Lovely!
Oh, yes! Fly away with grace!Seven Fathoms Deep
This lifted me up! Thank you!
Ah yes, we are all a work in progress lovely haiku ~ love the line 'see my wings….. carol, xxx
ReplyDeletewings still in the making is a lovely thought. What a clean and simple poem. I enjoyed this.
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful. You have such a big message within this simple haiku.
ReplyDeletePerfection in brevity!
ReplyDeleteYou must be an apprentice angel! Nice haiku.
ReplyDeletedo you want to fly over seven seas ... which is very hard ... but you shall have successfully...
ReplyDeleteNice and simple..
ReplyDeletei like the enrgy and spirit of the soul.....
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely haiku, Ramesh !!
ReplyDeleteI can see the twinkle of aspirations in the eyes, beautifully crafted RS:)
ReplyDeleteThis haiku has a reach across Seven sea..beautiful meg!
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteOh, yes! Fly away with grace!
DeleteSeven Fathoms Deep
This lifted me up! Thank you!
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