Friday, November 8, 2013

Seven Seas.. haiku

Written for


Prompt: Seven


See my wings,
still in the making;
seven seas


RS:)

14 comments:

  1. Ah yes, we are all a work in progress lovely haiku ~ love the line 'see my wings….. carol, xxx

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  2. wings still in the making is a lovely thought. What a clean and simple poem. I enjoyed this.

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  3. This is wonderful. You have such a big message within this simple haiku.

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  4. Perfection in brevity!

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  5. You must be an apprentice angel! Nice haiku.

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  6. do you want to fly over seven seas ... which is very hard ... but you shall have successfully...

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  7. i like the enrgy and spirit of the soul.....

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  8. I can see the twinkle of aspirations in the eyes, beautifully crafted RS:)

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  9. This haiku has a reach across Seven sea..beautiful meg!

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  10. This lifted me up! Thank you!

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