Friday, February 7, 2014

Helpful Winds Arrive... Haiku..



Haiku My Heart



each flutter of wings
takes him to a higher point;
helpful winds arrive

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helpful winds arrive
and he glides smoothly;
a happier she..

 RS:)
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7 comments:

  1. LeaFebruary 8, 2014 at 8:29 AM

    These helpful winds lift my spirit! Beautiful haiku for him and for her and for us! Thank you Ramesh!

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  2. Magical Mystical TeacherFebruary 8, 2014 at 2:03 PM

    She's happy because he's gliding away? Oh, dear, I hope not! ;)

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  3. Judith WesterfieldFebruary 9, 2014 at 11:59 AM

    LOVE the "she" and "HE"!!!!!!

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  4. RajlakshmiFebruary 9, 2014 at 7:56 PM

    As long as they are happy.. Nice haiku

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  5. LauraFebruary 10, 2014 at 3:05 PM

    a wonderful twist at the end with the shift in gender.

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  6. rudraprayagaFebruary 11, 2014 at 7:12 AM

    Connection of he and she, well done.

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  7. ~*. D E E P A .* ~February 12, 2014 at 8:29 AM

    sounds similar to "happy wife, happier life" but with the male & female interchanged !

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