Wednesday, July 9, 2014

Eerie Silence Shouts - Haiku for 3WW


Eerie, Guarded, Translucent


Eerie Silence Shouts



His guarded secret
shines in her translucent eyes;
Eerie silence shouts

**

Eerie silence shouts
as she breaks translucent glass;
nothing guarded now 



RS:)



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7 comments:

  1. Jae RoseJuly 9, 2014 at 12:20 PM

    Silence can be a formidable adversary...I love how this feels like a call and answer...two sides of the mirror shouting back at each other

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  2. Sheilagh LeeJuly 9, 2014 at 1:39 PM

    The call and the answer I love this both.

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  3. Judith WesterfieldJuly 9, 2014 at 3:06 PM

    WOW (just one word WOW!)

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  4. Old EggJuly 9, 2014 at 8:31 PM

    I loved the way you constructed these haiku.

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  5. UnknownJuly 10, 2014 at 5:49 AM

    The story it tells.... Wonderful haiku roll....

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  6. LocomenteJuly 10, 2014 at 9:41 PM

    A nice story said through Haiku...
    Nice!

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  7. J Cosmo NewberyJuly 10, 2014 at 11:19 PM

    It's getting a bit sultry in here...

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