Friday, July 11, 2014

Happy Home-coming


Written for Haiku My Heart


Happy Home-coming

Gathering of clouds,
smells of a conspiracy;
her scattered thoughts..

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Her scattered thoughts;
birds of myriad colours fly
on her patch of sky

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On her patch of sky
she sees his dark face appear;
a door shuts behind

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A door shuts behind;
she opens her umbrella
with rains lashing out

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With rains lashing out
oldie hears door bell ring young;
happy home-coming..

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Happy home-coming;
rose smiles with a hope of
getting watered..



RS:)




12 comments:

  1. beautiful homecoming thoughts Ramesh. :)

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  2. Homecomings can be wonderful occasions...most of the time! ;)

    Frog and Raven

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  3. All lovely Ramesh, but my favorite lines... birds of myriad colours fly
    on her patch of sky... thank you for these gems!

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  4. enjoyed your haiku sequence; have a nice weekend

    much love...

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  5. Lovely set of haiku. Beautiful story.:)

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  6. Oldies always love to hear young ring home.

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  7. A rose is indeed a ROSE. I was so surprised at the ending! Well penned! It seems no one else who commented was surprised that "she" was a rose. I must be staying out too long in the California sun!

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  8. Your domestic tales never fail to intrigue!

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  9. feeling nothing but LOVE!!!
    thank you dear friend for filling our hearts.
    xo

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  10. A build to ominous tension with a finale of blessed relief.

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