Friday, October 23, 2015

She Stands Confident


Written for Rebecca's Haiku My Heart.. Friday..



She Stands Confident


She stands confident;
highest point in dark space of
her own inner depths


**

Her own inner depths;
illumination by a
mere thought of his light...


**

Mere thought of his light
dims every doubt in her mind;
she stands confident


Or it can also be... depends...

He Stands Confident


He stands confident;
highest point in dark space of
his own inner depths


**

His own inner depths;
illumination by a
mere thought of her light...


**

Mere thought of her light
dims every doubt in his mind;
he stands confident




RS:)' 
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11 comments:

  1. payal agarwalOctober 23, 2015 at 3:38 AM

    I just love it! Both the versions are beautiful. They complete each other. :)

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  2. Gillena CoxOctober 23, 2015 at 5:19 AM

    lovely the fact that they "stand confident"

    have a nice Friday

    much love...

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  3. J COctober 23, 2015 at 7:40 AM

    Confidence intertwined. As it should be.

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  4. A Bit of the BlarneyOctober 23, 2015 at 7:57 AM

    What wonderful haikus! Confidence, they exude confidence!! Have a grand weekend

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  5. Reading PleasureOctober 23, 2015 at 8:04 AM

    Great!

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  6. LeaOctober 23, 2015 at 10:05 AM

    Yin and yang dancing through both... with great confidence...

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  7. gmaOctober 23, 2015 at 12:59 PM

    They belong together.

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  8. LenoraOctober 23, 2015 at 5:01 PM

    and so it goes around - the best in life is cyclic in nature..

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  9. Bastet's Waka LibraryOctober 24, 2015 at 10:16 PM

    lovely visions of yin and yang ... I enjoyed these haiku very much! Bastet

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  10. Rashmirekha MannaOctober 25, 2015 at 2:19 AM

    Her heart only prays...for His version to be true

    Regards
    RM

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  11. rebeccaOctober 26, 2015 at 5:47 PM

    dearest ramesh this is a radiant salutation of pure love. thank you for igniting my heart.

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