Friday, October 23, 2015

She Stands Confident


Written for Rebecca's Haiku My Heart.. Friday..





She Stands Confident


She stands confident;
highest point in dark space of
her own inner depths


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Her own inner depths;
illumination by a
mere thought of his light...


**

Mere thought of his light
dims every doubt in her mind;
she stands confident


Or it can also be... depends...

He Stands Confident


He stands confident;
highest point in dark space of
his own inner depths


**

His own inner depths;
illumination by a
mere thought of her light...


**

Mere thought of her light
dims every doubt in his mind;
he stands confident




RS:)

11 comments:

  1. I just love it! Both the versions are beautiful. They complete each other. :)

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  2. lovely the fact that they "stand confident"

    have a nice Friday

    much love...

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  3. Confidence intertwined. As it should be.

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  4. What wonderful haikus! Confidence, they exude confidence!! Have a grand weekend

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  5. Yin and yang dancing through both... with great confidence...

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  6. and so it goes around - the best in life is cyclic in nature..

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  7. lovely visions of yin and yang ... I enjoyed these haiku very much! Bastet

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  8. Her heart only prays...for His version to be true

    Regards
    RM

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  9. dearest ramesh this is a radiant salutation of pure love. thank you for igniting my heart.

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