Friday, December 28, 2012

I Wait for a Hug...



Written for ,
One Single Imprssion - Sunday
Haiku Heights - Saturday
&
Today , Friday for Haiku My Heart..

I WAIT FOR A HUG..

Joy & happiness
ride on New Year's shoulders;
ah, I am watching

Ah, I am watching,
some distance in between;
I wait for a hug

I wait for a hug;
sunnier Sun, brighter Moon,
happier flowers

Happier flowers
as naughty butterflies nudge; 
renewal around

Renewal around;
ride on New Year's shoulders,
joy and happiness


RS:)

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29 comments:

  1. WabiSabiDecember 28, 2012 at 6:41 AM

    I love the idea of riding on new year's shoulders! Happy New Year!

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  2. Amrit SinhaDecember 28, 2012 at 6:58 AM

    Have a great 2013 :-)

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  3. Priti LisaDecember 28, 2012 at 8:08 AM

    Naughty butterflies...
    and a hug♥

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  4. Annie JeffriesDecember 28, 2012 at 9:42 AM

    Ramesh - you are rapidly becoming the poster I look forward to seeing the most each week. Your circular haikus that create such complete and tiny stories totally enchant me.

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  5. carol l mckennaDecember 28, 2012 at 1:28 PM

    Romantic and divine haiku ~ ^_^

    Happy New Year to you ~ (A Creative Harbor aka ArtMuseDog and Carol ^_^)

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  6. ClaudiaDecember 28, 2012 at 8:35 PM

    Nice use of haiku for storytelling. Now I want a hug. :)

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  7. LollyDecember 28, 2012 at 9:23 PM

    "sunnier sun, brighter moon/ happier flowers" my favorite lines. Happy New Year, Ramesh.

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  8. AnonymousDecember 29, 2012 at 12:32 AM

    such a happy set Ramesh ji... I am sure you are inviting many hugs from the poet community...

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  9. anthonynorthDecember 29, 2012 at 12:47 AM

    A great mood for a new year.

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  10. AnonymousDecember 29, 2012 at 3:25 AM

    oh I really like this RS. Alot of hope and happiness in your words.

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  11. Dil ShayaraanaDecember 29, 2012 at 3:50 AM

    Very refreshing:)

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  12. GraceDecember 29, 2012 at 4:40 AM

    Lovely way to greet the new year ~

    Cheers and all the best for 2013 ~

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  13. TigerbriteDecember 29, 2012 at 7:14 AM

    Joy and happiness to you too:)

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  14. Ashish PattniDecember 29, 2012 at 7:18 AM

    Full of positivity. Nice way to wish online with a hug Thank you Rameshji, wishing you a too a great year ahead :-) Ashish Pattni

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  15. rebeccaDecember 29, 2012 at 8:41 AM

    dear all,
    i started early friday with such a bright hope for the day. so many haiku to visit, so many bright promises to fulfill. my day turned quickly on its heels into what became a living hell. for the last three weeks i have been battling extreme health concerns, i share this only to explain why i have been so hard pressed in visiting and leaving comments. yesterday took me to the very edge and this morning although i made it through an adverse med reaction with horrible vertigo, i am weak and undone. i do not like to write about my health issues, something i combat everyday to stay upright and among the living. but i see more and more of our haiku family dwindling away and i am sure many may have mistaken why, and taken it personally that i have failed to visit. this morning i am going to stay up long enough to be sure you all know that you have brought me comfort in my darkest hours without even knowing. for your kindness and patience i thank you with all my heart.

    xoxoxox,
    rebecca

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  16. ReshmaDecember 29, 2012 at 2:20 PM

    Such a joyous ride with health and happiness... great verse Rameshji.

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  17. Judith WesterfieldDecember 29, 2012 at 6:49 PM

    Ramesh,
    I wait for a hug -- poignant and wonderfully spoken haiku.
    Happy New Year My FRIEND!

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  18. RonDecember 30, 2012 at 5:47 AM

    Great work, Ramesh; esp like the bright moon & sunnier sun. Salute!

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  19. LauraDecember 30, 2012 at 11:28 AM

    so beautiful the way this turns and turns. happy new year!

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  20. DulcinaDecember 30, 2012 at 12:27 PM

    Riding on New Year's shoulders, like a child on his dad's, wonderful image, Ramesh, but if he wants a hug he must go down to save the distance...
    Happy New Year!
    :)

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  21. The Write GirlDecember 30, 2012 at 12:52 PM

    What a beautiful New Year haiku. I hope you receive your hug! Lovely poetry :)

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  22. AnonymousDecember 30, 2012 at 3:17 PM

    wishing you a wonderful journey through the new year Ramesh. sending lots of hugs too.

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  23. Harshad MehtaDecember 30, 2012 at 6:39 PM

    Wishing you lots of Joy & Happiness and lots of Hugs in coming New Year.
    Very joyous poem.

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  24. Lady In ReadDecember 30, 2012 at 9:50 PM

    Ramesh, a wonderful new year to you - full of joys, happiness, sunnier suns, brighter moons, happier flowers, naughty butterflies and of course hugs

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  25. PremIDecember 31, 2012 at 5:17 AM

    What a lovely way to greet New Year!
    With "Renewal around;"...,
    May Love & Joy..., Peace & Radiance... surround, on your ride 2013!

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  26. Ruchi JainJanuary 1, 2013 at 1:17 AM

    happy new year...

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  27. Woman'n'BeyondJanuary 1, 2013 at 8:28 AM

    I wish you a happy ride ahead! beautifully expressed!

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  28. Sadia KhanJanuary 1, 2013 at 8:08 PM

    We wait for the joy and happiness to hug us and the desperation increases with new year or new day approaching ...beautiful haiku :)
    happy new year :)

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  29. Kirti ShakunJanuary 1, 2013 at 11:09 PM

    What can be more beautiful to start the new year with other than your lovely poem...Happy New Year Sir!!!

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