Wednesday, December 19, 2012

Coarser Echo.. A Haiku



A Haiku Written for


Hardship, Echo, Softly



Smooth days of comfort
 speak softly of past hardships ;
coarser echo, that..


 

RS:)


10 comments:

  1. I really like the way you managed to include all three prompt words AND to make perfect sense! :)

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  2. As a crisp as a fine looking mirror..hopefully many hardships can be placed firmly in the past..

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  3. You've written a few words that say so much.

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  4. Less can mean more; never truer than here. Beautiful!

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  5. Nicely crafted
    And deep.

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  6. ""coarser echo" - such a great word image. As always your haiku speak to everyone.

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