Wednesday, December 19, 2012

Coarser Echo.. A Haiku



A Haiku Written for


Hardship, Echo, Softly



Smooth days of comfort
 speak softly of past hardships ;
coarser echo, that..


 

RS:)


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10 comments:

  1. Magical Mystical TeacherDecember 19, 2012 at 4:58 AM

    I really like the way you managed to include all three prompt words AND to make perfect sense! :)

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  2. Jae RoseDecember 19, 2012 at 6:33 AM

    As a crisp as a fine looking mirror..hopefully many hardships can be placed firmly in the past..

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  3. AnonymousDecember 19, 2012 at 7:25 AM

    You've written a few words that say so much.

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  4. AltonianDecember 19, 2012 at 8:41 AM

    Less can mean more; never truer than here. Beautiful!

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  5. JazzbumpaDecember 19, 2012 at 11:27 AM

    Nicely crafted
    And deep.

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  6. Sheilagh LeeDecember 19, 2012 at 1:17 PM

    lovely

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  7. CYNOSUREDecember 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM

    beautifully penned down... :)

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  8. UnknownDecember 20, 2012 at 2:21 AM

    so well said in three short lines

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  9. Tarang SinhaDecember 20, 2012 at 8:18 AM

    Nicely and wisely composed!:)

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  10. Judith WesterfieldDecember 20, 2012 at 11:14 AM

    ""coarser echo" - such a great word image. As always your haiku speak to everyone.

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