Friday, December 7, 2012

Pain Walks By..




Written for

Haiku My Heart , Friday
Haiku Heights, Saturday
One Single Impression, Sunday


Pain Walks By...


Morning stroll
and I hug that old oak;
pain walks by..

Pain walks by;
my heart feels winter's
steamy breath;

Steamy breath;
 happiness and I
become one


RS:)

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26 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaDecember 7, 2012 at 8:15 AM

    Lovely !!!

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  2. Judith WesterfieldDecember 7, 2012 at 8:25 AM

    This is inspiration for letting pain pass without engaging it.

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  3. Fran aka RedondowriterDecember 7, 2012 at 9:38 AM

    When I think of haiku, Ramesh, I always think of you. You have such a special way of capturing nature and feelings.

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  4. Jennifer WagnerDecember 7, 2012 at 12:40 PM

    Lovely capture. The second haiku in the set is my favorite.

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  5. Magical Mystical TeacherDecember 7, 2012 at 3:12 PM

    Oh, give me steamy breath too! This is delightful, Ramesh, simply delightful!

    Mary in Disguise

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  6. MeriDecember 7, 2012 at 3:15 PM

    Such a triumphant progression of haiku verses.

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  7. Lady In ReadDecember 7, 2012 at 4:01 PM

    a wonderful chain haiku once again..

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  8. Priti LisaDecember 7, 2012 at 4:55 PM

    That is exactly how I feel about walking...
    but you said it so much more beautifully♥

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  9. MarkDecember 8, 2012 at 4:06 AM

    As long as pain keeps on walking by, everything's all right!

    Last Night’s Tea Flowers

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  10. BarbaraDecember 8, 2012 at 4:51 AM

    Oh, I think this is one of your best sets ever! Walking away from the pain! And I love the image of becoming one with happiness!

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  11. Sankara Jayanth SDecember 8, 2012 at 9:15 AM

    beautiful!!! :)
    Riddle Of Hearts
    .

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  12. anthonynorthDecember 8, 2012 at 12:41 PM

    Excellently done.

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  13. vivinfranceDecember 8, 2012 at 12:52 PM

    A unique treatment of the prompt.

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  14. WabiSabiDecember 8, 2012 at 1:57 PM

    Surprising and delightful take on this prompt!

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  15. joanneDecember 8, 2012 at 7:54 PM

    absolutely lovely...

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  16. siggiofmaineDecember 8, 2012 at 9:32 PM

    WoW. Intense. Thank you

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  17. Harshad MehtaDecember 8, 2012 at 10:51 PM

    And this what makes me get up early & go for morning walk! So well put here!

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  18. PranitaDecember 9, 2012 at 3:10 AM

    This is very pleasing somehow! Loved it..
    Heavy breath near cold fireplace

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  19. Gillena CoxDecember 9, 2012 at 5:11 AM

    oh!! i like the last haiku best the resolve is hope

    much love...

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  20. AnonymousDecember 9, 2012 at 7:07 AM

    beautiful...emotive!

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  21. The Write GirlDecember 9, 2012 at 9:21 PM

    I enjoyed your play with words "winter's steamy breath." Nicely written Rmesh.

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  22. LocomenteDecember 9, 2012 at 10:12 PM

    Lovely!!

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/12/pain.html

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  23. Vinay Leo R.December 10, 2012 at 6:40 AM

    Embracing nature brings happiness for sure :) Nice one RS.

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  24. Philip Verghese 'Ariel'December 10, 2012 at 12:02 PM

    A Well Versed one.
    I am here new but
    I love the way in
    which you express
    things.Keep it up
    I just joined in
    Keep inform
    Best Regards
    Philip

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  25. Woman'n'BeyondDecember 11, 2012 at 11:08 PM

    wow! nature does bestow happiness, just give in and pain walks by. Lovely, lovely, lovely!!!

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  26. Lisa at GreenbowDecember 12, 2012 at 6:03 PM

    I love the ending, very uplifting.

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