Friday, November 30, 2012

Winter Freezes Dreams

A Chain of Haiku for
Haiku My Heart Friday, Haiku Heights Saturday
and
One Single Impression (OSI) Sunday

Winter Freezes Dreams

Ready to face storms,
life yearns for more joys and smiles;
winter freezes dreams

Winter freezes dreams;
I see  her eyes exude warmth,
snow in my heart melts..

Snow in my heart melts
causing a storm in my mind;
soul yearns for a truce

RS:)

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20 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaNovember 30, 2012 at 11:13 AM

    A beautiful cascading haiku ... loved it Sir :-)

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  2. PratibhaNovember 30, 2012 at 11:15 AM

    ah ! a truce from winters ..
    Good luck sir ;)

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  3. BarbaraNovember 30, 2012 at 5:50 PM

    Yes a truce is always welcome after a storm in the mind! Lovely cascade.

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  4. LeaNovember 30, 2012 at 9:32 PM

    So glad that eventually the snow melts, perhaps a river to a truce...

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  5. Judith WesterfieldNovember 30, 2012 at 10:48 PM

    Soul yearns for a truce - that is such a wonderfully, powerful, knowing line.
    Excellent haiku

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  6. anthonynorthDecember 1, 2012 at 7:35 AM

    A truce indeed.

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  7. PranitaDecember 1, 2012 at 7:37 AM

    Winter freezing dreams!!! Very well said...


    Stuck in race of time

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  8. rebeccaDecember 1, 2012 at 8:35 PM

    your words warm hearts!

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  9. AnonymousDecember 1, 2012 at 9:51 PM

    love the progression and the way you carry us through.

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  10. rallentandaDecember 2, 2012 at 6:46 AM

    Impressive haiku. Snow in your heart melts. Good.

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  11. AnonymousDecember 2, 2012 at 9:07 AM

    Wonderful interpretations of this prompt.

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  12. JimDecember 2, 2012 at 9:46 PM

    Hi Ramesh, I like the snow melting in your heart line. But I would think that would sooth things so I was surprised to see that it caused a storm.
    ..

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  13. Woman'n'BeyondDecember 3, 2012 at 7:03 AM

    'Snow in my heart melts
    causing a storm in my mind;
    soul yearns for a truce'

    This is amazing!

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  14. Lady In ReadDecember 3, 2012 at 8:41 AM

    from storm to storm, you covered it so well...
    your chain of haikus continue to amaze me...

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  15. The Write GirlDecember 3, 2012 at 7:32 PM

    You've done an amazing job covering the various themes Ramesh. Fantastic haikus as always!

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  16. Mr. McgranorDecember 4, 2012 at 12:22 PM

    Take her in your warm embrace.

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  17. LauraDecember 4, 2012 at 7:00 PM

    beautifully written Ramesh... love the way the phrases weave in and out.

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  18. Sri ValliDecember 4, 2012 at 8:15 PM

    "I see her eyes exude warmth,
    snow in my heart melts.."
    This is so interesting and creative thought...Very beautiful!

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  19. Vinay Leo R.December 5, 2012 at 8:21 AM

    Beautifully written pieces RSji..

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  20. Sankara Jayanth SDecember 7, 2012 at 1:35 PM

    amazing..beautiful lines..

    Death By Breeze

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