Friday, November 30, 2012

Winter Freezes Dreams

A Chain of Haiku for
Haiku My Heart Friday, Haiku Heights Saturday
and
One Single Impression (OSI) Sunday

Winter Freezes Dreams

Ready to face storms,
life yearns for more joys and smiles;
winter freezes dreams

Winter freezes dreams;
I see  her eyes exude warmth,
snow in my heart melts..

Snow in my heart melts
causing a storm in my mind;
soul yearns for a truce

RS:)

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21 comments:

  1. A beautiful cascading haiku ... loved it Sir :-)

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  2. ah ! a truce from winters ..
    Good luck sir ;)

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  3. Yes a truce is always welcome after a storm in the mind! Lovely cascade.

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  4. So glad that eventually the snow melts, perhaps a river to a truce...

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  5. Soul yearns for a truce - that is such a wonderfully, powerful, knowing line.
    Excellent haiku

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  6. Winter freezing dreams!!! Very well said...


    Stuck in race of time

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  7. love the progression and the way you carry us through.

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  8. Impressive haiku. Snow in your heart melts. Good.

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  9. Wonderful interpretations of this prompt.

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  10. Hi Ramesh, I like the snow melting in your heart line. But I would think that would sooth things so I was surprised to see that it caused a storm.
    ..

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  11. 'Snow in my heart melts
    causing a storm in my mind;
    soul yearns for a truce'

    This is amazing!

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  12. from storm to storm, you covered it so well...
    your chain of haikus continue to amaze me...

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  13. You've done an amazing job covering the various themes Ramesh. Fantastic haikus as always!

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  14. beautifully written Ramesh... love the way the phrases weave in and out.

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  15. "I see her eyes exude warmth,
    snow in my heart melts.."
    This is so interesting and creative thought...Very beautiful!

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  16. Beautifully written pieces RSji..

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