Saturday, November 10, 2012

Her Rhythmic Footfalls.

Written for HH, OSI and HMH..

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Prompt: Silence


Prompt : struggle


Her Footfalls Stay Quiet..


Sunbeams hit her face,
breaking her inner silence;
musical notes grow..


Musical notes grow;
morning struggles to move with
her rhythmic footfalls



RS:)

15 comments:

  1. I am thinking, Ramesh, that for this day the morning will lose out. XD
    ..

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  2. Her rhythmic footfalls ---> wow I can hear it :-)

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  3. Rhythm carries the music forward. Hearing her move around the house is always music to my ears.

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  4. Love it, especially breaking her inner silence.

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  5. Musical!
    (who is the woman you always write about? Someone we've all met through your eyes and ears)

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  6. Such a beautiful picture painted with your words!

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  7. musical notes grow...it grew on me, very nice

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  8. nice rythm Rameshji..I wonder whether you have a muse to make you pen such wonderful and effortless haiku :)

    Do visit: http://njn-sorceress.blogspot.in/

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  9. Those comforting sounds of life, music to our ears.

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  10. She is dancing in your haiku...

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  11. beautiful....i enjoyed the association of morning light, musical notes and silence :)

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  12. Morning's amazing struggle! Great poem. Thank you.

    Friend, your prompt "nest" comes up at OSI tomorrow. Do you have a poem for me?

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