Written for HH, OSI and HMH..
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Prompt: Silence
Prompt : struggle
Prompt : struggle
Her Footfalls Stay Quiet..
Sunbeams hit her face,
breaking her inner silence;
musical notes grow..
Musical notes grow;
morning struggles to move with
morning struggles to move with
her rhythmic footfalls
RS:)
I am thinking, Ramesh, that for this day the morning will lose out. XD
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Her rhythmic footfalls ---> wow I can hear it :-)
ReplyDeletevery nice use of the prompts
ReplyDeleteGreat image in this.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful music here!
ReplyDeleteRhythm carries the music forward. Hearing her move around the house is always music to my ears.
ReplyDeleteLove it, especially breaking her inner silence.
ReplyDeleteMusical!
ReplyDelete(who is the woman you always write about? Someone we've all met through your eyes and ears)
Such a beautiful picture painted with your words!
ReplyDeletemusical notes grow...it grew on me, very nice
ReplyDeletenice rythm Rameshji..I wonder whether you have a muse to make you pen such wonderful and effortless haiku :)
ReplyDeleteDo visit: http://njn-sorceress.blogspot.in/
Those comforting sounds of life, music to our ears.
ReplyDeleteShe is dancing in your haiku...
ReplyDeletebeautiful....i enjoyed the association of morning light, musical notes and silence :)
ReplyDeleteMorning's amazing struggle! Great poem. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteFriend, your prompt "nest" comes up at OSI tomorrow. Do you have a poem for me?