Friday, November 23, 2012

Her Love Nest in Greens

A Chain of Haiku for
Haiku My Heart Friday, Haiku Heights Saturday
and
One Single Impression (OSI)
 NEST is the prompt I proposed for
 OSI for Sunday

Dedicated to My Wife..

Her Love Nest in Greens


Her love nest in greens;
she crosses desert of life
with dreams in her eyes

With dreams in her eyes;
she holds them tight in her heart,
winter warms her hearth

Winter warms her hearth;
moonlit deserts shine no more,
now Moon hangs on tree

Now Moon hangs on tree;
luminous in her own light
her love nest in greens


RS:)
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31 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaNovember 23, 2012 at 9:28 AM

    Such a beautiful piece ... this reflects so much of love and warmth ... amazing !!!

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  2. PratibhaNovember 23, 2012 at 12:16 PM

    Beautiful lines for a much deserving lady :)

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  3. AnonymousNovember 23, 2012 at 1:54 PM

    what a lovely sentiment of words you have strung for your wife.
    ~Dawn

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  4. Magical Mystical TeacherNovember 23, 2012 at 3:57 PM

    I hope you got at least one kiss for this! Maybe more!

    Desert Monk

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  5. GraceNovember 23, 2012 at 5:55 PM

    What a lovely dedication ~ Nice cascading haiku RS ~

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  6. Judith WesterfieldNovember 23, 2012 at 6:03 PM

    What an incredible husband your wife has to write such loving poety.

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  7. anthonynorthNovember 24, 2012 at 1:48 AM

    A beautiful tribute.

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  8. rallentandaNovember 24, 2012 at 2:13 AM

    Nice. I did not know you were married.

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  9. UnknownNovember 24, 2012 at 3:12 AM

    so sweet! What a lucky lady to have poems written to her!

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  10. NoopurNovember 24, 2012 at 4:00 AM

    That was lovely...!!

    Do visit my world sometime...
    apparitionofmine.blogspot.com

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  11. MarkNovember 24, 2012 at 5:03 AM

    "Winter warms her hearth"

    Startlingly beautiful juxtaposition of images!

    Birches Haiku

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  12. carol l mckennaNovember 24, 2012 at 5:49 AM

    Loving and wonderful tribute to your wife ~ (A Creative Harbor) ^_^

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  13. Kodjo DeynooNovember 24, 2012 at 5:55 AM

    Passionate and moving, appreciative of your talent

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  14. Woman'n'BeyondNovember 24, 2012 at 6:43 AM

    Wow! Lovely, A sincere expression of love and an exquisite piece of haiku!

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  15. rebeccaNovember 24, 2012 at 9:21 AM

    thank you ramesh for this tender homage to your beloved wife. now i too bask in her lovelight.

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  16. ChèvrefeuilleNovember 24, 2012 at 10:11 AM

    Another wonderful composed cascading haiku Ramesh, nicely done.

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  17. AnonymousNovember 24, 2012 at 1:36 PM

    Wonderful Ramesh, what a beautiful accolade for your wife x

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  18. brudbergNovember 24, 2012 at 2:30 PM

    Lovely poetry

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  19. Susan DanielsNovember 24, 2012 at 5:43 PM

    Ramesh, these are beautiful. Really like how you took the desert and made it lush.

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  20. Sri ValliNovember 24, 2012 at 7:29 PM

    That's a sweet dedication :)
    Lovely flow of words...

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  21. Ron.November 24, 2012 at 9:37 PM

    I always look forward to these looping haiku chains. Masterfull and beautiful, this.

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  22. Harshad MehtaNovember 25, 2012 at 12:26 AM

    Heartfelt dedication. Excellent.

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  23. AnonymousNovember 25, 2012 at 5:27 AM

    beautiful words..!

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  24. AnonymousNovember 25, 2012 at 9:14 AM

    A wonderful tribute to love and a great prompt!

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  25. Lady In ReadNovember 25, 2012 at 4:50 PM

    a lovely dedication.. beautiful words.. and love the haiku chain...

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  26. JimNovember 27, 2012 at 9:19 AM

    Very nice, Ramesh. That love nest in the trees has appealing offerings for the birds.

    Thank you for the nice prompt word. I had fun with it.
    ..

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  27. SusanNovember 28, 2012 at 4:16 PM

    Nested form, love nest of a home, oasis in a desert. lovely!

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  28. PranitaNovember 28, 2012 at 8:36 PM

    You must have a beautiful wife Ramesh ji... all your Haiku reflect that :)
    Lovely haiku..

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  29. LauraNovember 29, 2012 at 6:26 PM

    so tender and precious.

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  30. AnonymousNovember 30, 2012 at 3:42 AM

    what a beautiful poem like a cross between villanelle and haiku - what love you must share!

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  31. PremIDecember 1, 2012 at 4:19 AM

    Superb (Re)presentation, an excellent expression and lovely dedication...

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