Friday, November 23, 2012

Her Love Nest in Greens

A Chain of Haiku for
Haiku My Heart Friday, Haiku Heights Saturday
and
One Single Impression (OSI)
 NEST is the prompt I proposed for
 OSI for Sunday

Dedicated to My Wife..

Her Love Nest in Greens


Her love nest in greens;
she crosses desert of life
with dreams in her eyes

With dreams in her eyes;
she holds them tight in her heart,
winter warms her hearth

Winter warms her hearth;
moonlit deserts shine no more,
now Moon hangs on tree

Now Moon hangs on tree;
luminous in her own light
her love nest in greens


RS:)

31 comments:

  1. Such a beautiful piece ... this reflects so much of love and warmth ... amazing !!!

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  2. Beautiful lines for a much deserving lady :)

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  3. what a lovely sentiment of words you have strung for your wife.
    ~Dawn

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  4. I hope you got at least one kiss for this! Maybe more!

    Desert Monk

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  5. What a lovely dedication ~ Nice cascading haiku RS ~

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  6. What an incredible husband your wife has to write such loving poety.

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  7. Nice. I did not know you were married.

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  8. so sweet! What a lucky lady to have poems written to her!

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  9. That was lovely...!!

    Do visit my world sometime...
    apparitionofmine.blogspot.com

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  10. "Winter warms her hearth"

    Startlingly beautiful juxtaposition of images!

    Birches Haiku

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  11. Loving and wonderful tribute to your wife ~ (A Creative Harbor) ^_^

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  12. Passionate and moving, appreciative of your talent

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  13. Wow! Lovely, A sincere expression of love and an exquisite piece of haiku!

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  14. thank you ramesh for this tender homage to your beloved wife. now i too bask in her lovelight.

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  15. Another wonderful composed cascading haiku Ramesh, nicely done.

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  16. Wonderful Ramesh, what a beautiful accolade for your wife x

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  17. Ramesh, these are beautiful. Really like how you took the desert and made it lush.

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  18. That's a sweet dedication :)
    Lovely flow of words...

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  19. I always look forward to these looping haiku chains. Masterfull and beautiful, this.

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  20. beautiful words..!

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  21. A wonderful tribute to love and a great prompt!

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  22. a lovely dedication.. beautiful words.. and love the haiku chain...

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  23. Very nice, Ramesh. That love nest in the trees has appealing offerings for the birds.

    Thank you for the nice prompt word. I had fun with it.
    ..

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  24. Nested form, love nest of a home, oasis in a desert. lovely!

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  25. You must have a beautiful wife Ramesh ji... all your Haiku reflect that :)
    Lovely haiku..

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  26. what a beautiful poem like a cross between villanelle and haiku - what love you must share!

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  27. Superb (Re)presentation, an excellent expression and lovely dedication...

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