Thursday, November 15, 2012

She Stands Behind Me..

Written for Rebecca's
Haiku My Heart..

She Stands Behind Me..

I look in mirror
and lo, find her smiling back;
she stands behind me..

She stands behind me
pushing me to move ahead;
No, snow melts me not..

No, snow melts me not..
nor does the sun burn my dreams;
yes, I move ahead

Yes, I move ahead;
whenever I find feeling low
I look in mirror..



  1. This is so lovely... nor does the sun burn my dreams... I love this line and all that your haiku evokes... yes. I move ahead. Beautiful Ramesh.

  2. Looking in the mirror whenever we feel low ... that's a wonderful statement Sir :-)

  3. so beautiful Ramesh. I hope that you will consider sharing an offering for this year's 4th annual gratitude word quilt. You can find information about the project and how to participate at the top of my blog. If you’ve already sent something thank you. The quilt is growing quite expansive and with only first names, I can’t always remember who already shared. Feel free to write in your native language google translate is available on my blog so every one can read and understand one another. Every Blessing~ Laura

  4. How joyful and romantic. So tender.

  5. How wonderfully you write ~ always good to read your haiku ~ elicits such feelings of love ~ (A Creative Harbor) ^_^

  6. love, loss, and perseverance.....lovely write...

  7. Wonderful words. Put together nicely. Burning my dreams, worth remembering. Very good!


  8. your words are gorgeous and filled with a strong uplifting connection to love!
    so grateful for our friday interludes, and the bond that lifts all our hearts.

  9. As long as she's behind you, you can do what you need to do...fearlessly!

    Golden Lace Shadows