Written for Haiku Heights & OSI
Rebecca's Haiku My Heart
Prompt: Nature
From my book "A Little More Than Ordinary.."
I have always found nature hiding greatest
lessons of life in its unfolding everyday...This one just happened...
"Welcome Breeze",
Exclaim fresh leaves
And dry ones cry,
"No please, no please"
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I Take Out Woollens..
Nature has her way
to keep changing her attire;
layer of winter
Layer of winter
subdues fury of the Sun;
I take out woollens..
I take out woollens;
happy hues and the colours
say a warm hello..
I have always found nature hiding greatest
lessons of life in its unfolding everyday...This one just happened...
"Welcome Breeze",
Exclaim fresh leaves
And dry ones cry,
"No please, no please"
***
I Take Out Woollens..
Nature has her way
to keep changing her attire;
layer of winter
Layer of winter
subdues fury of the Sun;
I take out woollens..
I take out woollens;
happy hues and the colours
say a warm hello..
RS:)
Oh, I like the cuddliness of this!
ReplyDeleteI had the weather in mind too, this is a warm piece
ReplyDeleteLike that Nature has it's way of changing attire. Nice rhythm too it as well as sentiment
ReplyDeleteNice use of nature liking it
ReplyDeleteThe many faces of nature. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteTaking out woollens has a lovely ring and feel to it!
ReplyDeleteNature Paints
I like the woolens to.. :-)
ReplyDeleteRameshji Namaste! Your Haiku and poetry always brings a smile..:) How beautiful this winter is with this Haiku :)
ReplyDeleteHi Ramesh
ReplyDeleteI was thinking about sorting out my woollens too.
Winter is coming.
Good one Ramesh, love the way you have painted nature here in your haiku.
ReplyDeleteNamaste
Awesome job with the nature prompt! I like the flow of it.
ReplyDeleteI love the first one!
ReplyDeletePlease! Please! - Really nature brings different news for different people.
Loved the first one! Wonderful thought, beautifully rhymed...
ReplyDeleteI wish to be as happy about taking out my woolens as you.....nicely painted palette
ReplyDeleteDelicious thoughts in this collection. My woollens have to be wool, though - none of that acrylic rubbish.
ReplyDeletenicely said ..!
ReplyDeleteReady for the winter!!! I had forgotten how that went, we don't need to do that in Texas. Right now we are in London, I suppose these folk will do that.
ReplyDelete..
wonderfully written
ReplyDeleteLovely set indeed!:)
ReplyDeleteI always enjoy that time of the year. Beautifully crafted. A pleasure to read and relate to my own life.
ReplyDeleteIt is that time of year. I love this time of year of woolens and time to enjoy nature.
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