Wednesday, October 31, 2012

Spontaniety Can Vanish




Prompt: Illustrate, False, Sallow

Confession

No false pretensions
But I find it difficult to use
the word 'Sallow' properly
No, I don't even have
Any idea to create
Even an illustration
Well doesn't matter
If I am sometimes loved
As magician with words, still
I  am a human and
Spontaniety can vanish
For a few moments
Breaking the flow..
While making this confession
Trust me, my skin is
Not turning sallow...
Some words
Deserve respect, na..



RS:)

9 comments:

  1. Sometimes, in spite of ourselves, we make some pretty good poetry. Good job, Ramesh. I feel for you, and thanks for the chuckle!

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  2. Cool ... a perfect poet's poem :-)

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  3. Ramesh - I thought exactly the same about sallow..it seems to have to go with a word to further explain what it means! good to be challenged though..Jae

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  4. When you don't know what to do you can always write about not knowing what to do...

    I have been there, done that. :D

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  5. I think you used it well, definitely creatively.

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  6. In the end, a good use of the words!

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  7. ha! exactly my feelings at first look :D

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  8. I know how you feel - I struggled to find an angle to use to incorporate the three words. Happy enough with the result but a struggle!

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