Sunday, October 14, 2012

Flight of Space Within..



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Flight of Space Within..


Different both, yet
can't be free from each other;
ah, I and my mind ;

Ah, I and my mind;
happy heart gets wings, takes a
flight of space within...

Flight of space within;
hey, will the courageous one
return with a smile?


RS:)

Thanks Harshadji...for the Space Within
for Free Flights of Thoughts..
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10 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaOctober 14, 2012 at 1:26 AM

    A smile towards the end ... loved it !!!

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  2. anthonynorthOctober 14, 2012 at 1:33 AM

    He always must. Great write.

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  3. Amit BhargavaOctober 14, 2012 at 4:39 AM

    My mind and I are one ... and neither doubts that there will be reason to smile ... even in the face of adversity!!!

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  4. AnonymousOctober 14, 2012 at 6:52 AM

    thoughtful indeed!

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  5. Lisa at GreenbowOctober 14, 2012 at 8:02 AM

    Yep, the mind and the body are separate yet same. Lovin' those space flights and the feeling of freedom. Must return with a smile. :)

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  6. GeraldineOctober 14, 2012 at 9:28 AM

    Love the ending with a smile!

    http://mypoeticpath.wordpress.com/2012/10/12/haiku-reflections-breathing-free/

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  7. Harshad MehtaOctober 14, 2012 at 10:24 AM

    Beautifully put. Will return with smile.

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  8. ShailOctober 14, 2012 at 10:38 PM

    Happy hearts indeed have wings :)

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  9. The Write GirlOctober 15, 2012 at 8:11 PM

    Wonderful ending Ramesh. I believe the courageous one will return with a smile!

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  10. Geraldine October 20, 2012 at 9:04 AM

    thoughtful and beautifully expressed. :<)

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