Wednesday, October 17, 2012

Rattling Sound of Your Thoughts


Written for:



Rattle, Know, Calm


Rattling Sound of Your Thoughts


Rattling sound
of your thoughts,
in my mind,
you know
make me lose
my calm..

Ah, your presence
is more comforting
than your thoughts..


RS:)

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8 comments:

  1. Magical Mystical TeacherOctober 17, 2012 at 5:24 AM

    I can only hope that you find your calm again!

    Three Foreign Tongues

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  2. AltonianOctober 17, 2012 at 6:11 AM

    Yes, to be with a loved one is better than just thinking of her/him.

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  3. Sheilagh LeeOctober 17, 2012 at 9:16 AM

    presence is always better then hearing their thoughts.

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  4. Amrit SinhaOctober 17, 2012 at 11:48 AM

    Beautiful and sublime :-)

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  5. Laurie KolpOctober 18, 2012 at 5:58 AM

    Nice...

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  6. SandyCarlsonOctober 18, 2012 at 5:52 PM

    There's nothing like the genuine presence of a beloved friend. Thank you for this poem.

    Thanks, also, for your comments on my blog.

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  7. RMPOctober 21, 2012 at 1:31 PM

    very lovely piece.

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  8. UnknownOctober 22, 2012 at 9:23 AM

    enjoyed your poem! sometimes your last stanza is so true!

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