Friday, October 12, 2012

Pieces of Apple..



Written for

Haiku My Heart   
Haiku Heights



A layer of juice
shrouds the edge of shining knife;
 pieces of apple

pieces of apple
leave their mark on the glass plate;
a layer of juice


RS:)
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16 comments:

  1. GraceOctober 12, 2012 at 11:59 AM

    I like your example - apples are all around us ~

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  2. Amrit SinhaOctober 12, 2012 at 11:59 AM

    A layer of juice ... sublime poetry !!!

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  3. joanneOctober 12, 2012 at 1:55 PM

    a snapshot of a single event....lovely....

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  4. LauraOctober 12, 2012 at 3:49 PM

    "shrouds the edge of shining knife;".... love that line!

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  5. Magical Mystical TeacherOctober 12, 2012 at 6:16 PM

    An ordinary, but extraordinarily enticing, scene!

    Instead of Poppies

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  6. Judith WesterfieldOctober 12, 2012 at 10:21 PM

    Love the apples. Great picture you painted.

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  7. LeaOctober 12, 2012 at 11:14 PM

    Just lovely Ramesh, "shrouds the edge of the shining knife" has so many layers of meaning...

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  8. SpadomanOctober 13, 2012 at 3:49 AM

    Yes, descriptive, alluring, very tasty, wonderful


    Peace

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  9. ChèvrefeuilleOctober 13, 2012 at 5:16 AM

    Very different take on 'shroud', nice cascade.

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  10. anthonynorthOctober 13, 2012 at 8:02 AM

    Nicely done, as always.

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  11. C.S.HOctober 13, 2012 at 8:52 AM

    The little things we tend to overlook.. and so many people fail to notice.. Nice Haiku!!

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  12. TigerbriteOctober 13, 2012 at 10:44 AM

    Nice... sounds tempting :)

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  13. AnonymousOctober 13, 2012 at 1:27 PM

    Love the cascade, and takes me away from more sinister meaning of shroud

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  14. rebeccaOctober 13, 2012 at 7:12 PM

    delicious!

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  15. PriyaOctober 14, 2012 at 4:55 AM

    Apples around me everywhere and I love apple juice...Awesome piece of work.. :)

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  16. AmberOctober 14, 2012 at 10:35 AM

    My favourite so far! Loved it totally! :)

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