Saturday, October 20, 2012

Moonbeams Let Dreams Gleam...


Prompt : Conscious

Moonbeams Let Dreams Gleam...

I pull the sheet of
starry night over my eyes;
a conscious effort

A conscious effort
to pluck happiness & joy;
moonbeams let dreams gleam


RS:)



Also shared with Rebecca's Haiku My Heart


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18 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 20, 2012 at 12:41 AM

    Nice like the use of moonbeams that gleam

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  2. AnonymousOctober 20, 2012 at 1:25 AM

    How very nice! Yes, moonbeams that gleam - that is a beautiful phrase!

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  3. GraceOctober 20, 2012 at 4:55 AM

    I like the moonbeams gleaming ~

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  4. Rick.DaddarioOctober 20, 2012 at 6:09 AM

    aloha Ramesh - that first ku has a great clarity with each image you use - and i like that it can be read in multiple ways that are very different. aloha.

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  5. Amrit SinhaOctober 20, 2012 at 6:21 AM

    Wow ... this was just too beautiful !!!

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  6. PranitaOctober 20, 2012 at 6:39 AM

    i lovvv the idea of using starry night as a cover! Sooo dreamy!
    Now dreams come alive!

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  7. anthonynorthOctober 20, 2012 at 7:17 AM

    Beautifully mystical words.

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  8. Ron.October 20, 2012 at 8:39 AM

    The usual connection of night-->sleep-->dream-->UNconsciousness is turned on its head here. Well done.

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  9. TigerbriteOctober 20, 2012 at 12:07 PM

    Nice Ramesh

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  10. MamaTimOctober 21, 2012 at 2:21 AM

    Your haiku is always my favourite, Ramesh – ♥

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  11. AmityOctober 21, 2012 at 3:13 AM

    Hello Rs!

    Hey, am back, to HH!
    I was unconscious for quite many months...now I am back to my consciousness...of writing again in my blog!

    As always you write beautiful Haiku!

    I love the imagery of your conscious Haiku! Welldone!

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    1. Ramesh SoodOctober 21, 2012 at 4:50 AM

      Welcome back Amity...great!!!!!

      ..I think HH and other places did miss you... During Sept. Challenge.. it was Ode to Women from me. Each haiku was dedicated to 'She'.. have a look sometime...

      Can't put a comment on your page as it doesn't support my browser.. but shall always read..as my blog list has your blog too and indicates when you write..today it did announce your arrival back to consciousness..

      Regards,

      RS:)

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  12. BarbaraOctober 21, 2012 at 10:10 AM

    Your words are always so lush! I especially like "I pull the sheet of starry night over my eyes." Lovely!

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  13. AnonymousOctober 21, 2012 at 4:03 PM

    Oh this is delightful x moonbeams let dreams gleam is a wonderful phrase x

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  14. DulcinaOctober 21, 2012 at 4:54 PM

    Stellar haiku, Ramesh. Wonderful imagery.
    :)

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  15. The Write GirlOctober 21, 2012 at 5:14 PM

    I love this Ramesh! When I read this theme, I also thought of moonbeams for my haiku. Beautifully written!

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  16. Sanjana October 22, 2012 at 7:25 AM

    Rameshji...do u need words to make you beleive how MUCH i loved reading ur haiku :)

    http://njn-sorceress.blogspot.in/2012/10/present-times.html

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  17. SusanOctober 25, 2012 at 12:27 PM



    Lovely. The conscious effort takes strength, takes shutting off what would hold us in another moment. Thank you for the reminder.

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