Saturday, October 20, 2012

Moonbeams Let Dreams Gleam...


Prompt : Conscious

Moonbeams Let Dreams Gleam...

I pull the sheet of
starry night over my eyes;
a conscious effort

A conscious effort
to pluck happiness & joy;
moonbeams let dreams gleam


RS:)



Also shared with Rebecca's Haiku My Heart


18 comments:

  1. Nice like the use of moonbeams that gleam

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  2. How very nice! Yes, moonbeams that gleam - that is a beautiful phrase!

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  3. I like the moonbeams gleaming ~

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  4. aloha Ramesh - that first ku has a great clarity with each image you use - and i like that it can be read in multiple ways that are very different. aloha.

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  5. Wow ... this was just too beautiful !!!

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  6. i lovvv the idea of using starry night as a cover! Sooo dreamy!
    Now dreams come alive!

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  7. The usual connection of night-->sleep-->dream-->UNconsciousness is turned on its head here. Well done.

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  8. Your haiku is always my favourite, Ramesh – ♥

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  9. Hello Rs!

    Hey, am back, to HH!
    I was unconscious for quite many months...now I am back to my consciousness...of writing again in my blog!

    As always you write beautiful Haiku!

    I love the imagery of your conscious Haiku! Welldone!

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    1. Welcome back Amity...great!!!!!

      ..I think HH and other places did miss you... During Sept. Challenge.. it was Ode to Women from me. Each haiku was dedicated to 'She'.. have a look sometime...

      Can't put a comment on your page as it doesn't support my browser.. but shall always read..as my blog list has your blog too and indicates when you write..today it did announce your arrival back to consciousness..

      Regards,

      RS:)

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  10. Your words are always so lush! I especially like "I pull the sheet of starry night over my eyes." Lovely!

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  11. Oh this is delightful x moonbeams let dreams gleam is a wonderful phrase x

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  12. Stellar haiku, Ramesh. Wonderful imagery.
    :)

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  13. I love this Ramesh! When I read this theme, I also thought of moonbeams for my haiku. Beautifully written!

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  14. Rameshji...do u need words to make you beleive how MUCH i loved reading ur haiku :)

    http://njn-sorceress.blogspot.in/2012/10/present-times.html

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  15. Lovely. The conscious effort takes strength, takes shutting off what would hold us in another moment. Thank you for the reminder.

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