Friday, October 5, 2012

Doors Open In Heart(h)



Saturday IST 1227 hrs..
Written for


Prompt: Home


Doors Open In Heart(h)


Ah, she is busy
keeping and making her home;
a beautiful world


A beautiful world
where love spills from each moment;
doors open in Heart(h)

doors open in Heart(h)
each dream comes rolling in joy,
goes away laughing


Goes away laughing
let the footprints fade away;
ah, she is busy..


RS:)


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17 comments:

  1. anthonynorthOctober 6, 2012 at 12:07 AM

    Delightful.

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  2. vivinfranceOctober 6, 2012 at 12:34 AM

    Charming.

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  3. Amrit SinhaOctober 6, 2012 at 2:57 AM

    This was pleasant to read :-)

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  4. GraceOctober 6, 2012 at 4:25 AM

    Nice cascading haiku...the way the home should be ~

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  5. Ron.October 6, 2012 at 4:59 AM

    Enjoyed the circularity of this, RS. Well done.

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  6. ChèvrefeuilleOctober 6, 2012 at 5:19 AM

    Always busy ... to make her home ... HOME

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  7. BarbaraOctober 6, 2012 at 6:26 AM

    Lovely effect with the cascade! Heart(h) -very clever!

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  8. rebeccaOctober 6, 2012 at 10:55 AM

    this is a perfect joyful outpouring of love,
    thank you ramesh for a cascade of joy!

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  9. Magical Mystical TeacherOctober 6, 2012 at 4:17 PM

    Does she get a chance to rest? :)

    Shadowy Home for Critters

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  10. PranitaOctober 7, 2012 at 7:14 AM

    Wow! I love the lines - 'each dream comes rolling in joy,
    goes away laughing'

    Live to die at home!

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  11. Judith WesterfieldOctober 7, 2012 at 2:25 PM

    I'd like to live in your home! Wonderful

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  12. MamaTimOctober 8, 2012 at 1:13 AM

    I love it especially your "A beautiful world
    where love spills from each moment".. So sweet, reminds me of my Mom, my home - ♥

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  13. RachelOctober 8, 2012 at 10:06 AM

    Another wonderful set,about the joys of making a home.

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  14. ekta khetanOctober 10, 2012 at 1:14 AM

    Very well written...loved th stanza...she is busy making her home a beautiful world!

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  15. BKOctober 10, 2012 at 1:15 AM

    good one!

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  16. NirjaOctober 10, 2012 at 7:50 AM

    Reminds me of my home and I can picture my mom working away to make her house beautiful!

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  17. Vinay Leo R.October 10, 2012 at 10:30 AM

    I don't know why, but the (h) makes me think of a rolling piece of coal :)

    The haiku is of course, quite nice.

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