Written for
Haiku My Heart - Friday
Haiku Heights - Saturday
One Single Impression - Sunday
Wish, She Understands
Ah, frozen ice cube
feels insecure and pained;
chill makes her shun ice
Chill makes her shun ice;
goblet feels the twinge as she
snubs melonchaly
Snubs melancholy
and her drink plays with the pain;
wish, she understands
Wish, she understands
for winter shall be tougher;
ah, frozen icecube
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Two hundredth
prompt at haiku heights;
wish for more
Wish for more
happier stars around;
haiku shines..
Two hundredth
prompt at haiku heights;
wish for more
Wish for more
happier stars around;
haiku shines..
RS:)
We are traveling. And on our trip, we have a cooler in the rear of the car. In this cooler sits a bag of ice cubes. Now, I sit and think about how they might be feeling after spending three days in that cooler with the other cubes and pieces of food. Slowly melting and losing girth. Each of them too tired to feel sorry for the other. Dissolving to the air we breath and turning back to water. Cool stuff!
ReplyDeletePeace
Brilliant!
ReplyDeleteI've read it 3 times,
each time it made me feel differently.
another lovely cascading haiku ~
ReplyDelete(A Creative Harbor) aka artmusedog and Carol ^_^
You are simply the magician of haiku ... well done Sir :-)
ReplyDeletedear ramesh,
ReplyDeletethank you for being here, so warm and loyal to haiku!
Lovely cascading haiku ~ Hope you are well ~
ReplyDeleteGreat depth and power. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Ramesh ji... the haiku set is amazing... ah the frozen cube...
ReplyDeleteFrozen cubes, tougher winters, beautifully woven words!
ReplyDeleteLovely cascade, as usual! You say so much in so few words. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteHer drink plays with her pain ~ brilliant ~ sums it all up for me.
ReplyDeleteWonderful rendition of wishes - ♥
ReplyDeleteI understand that wish for more prompts! Always enjoy how your haiku cascade!
ReplyDeleteSnubbing melancholy is definitely an art!
ReplyDeleteHiding Place
congratulations on 200 haikus... I love the way these flow one into the next.
ReplyDeleteWishing for understanding - nice nice take on the prompt
ReplyDeleteShe will go for it!
ReplyDeleteExcellent set of Haiku.
As always..fantastic haiku :)
ReplyDeleteVery well crafted, as usual, Ramesh. You have created such a magic atmosphere...
ReplyDeleteAs for the last pair, yes, we wish for more.
:)
There is an American song, and older one 70's(?), called 'Cold as Ice.'
ReplyDelete"Cold As Ice"
You're as cold as ice
You're willing to sacrifice our love
You never take advice
Someday you'll pay the price
I know
I've seen it before
It happens all the time
You're closing the door
You leave the world behind
You're digging for gold
Yet throwing away
A fortune in feelings
But someday you'll pay
You're as cold as ice
You're willing to sacrifice our love
You want Paradise
But someday you'll pay the price
I know
and more at:
http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/foreigner/coldasice.html
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At any rate, I like your poem. Do you think it could be sung?
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