Wednesday, February 6, 2013

He Cut Her Wings...


My 695th Post

Written for



Embarrass, Backfire, Taste


His ideas, born
in her mind,
never backfired..
no embarrassments
He never tasted failure
'cos that was left
for her to taste,
stingy and bitter
if ever it happened
because of  her ideas
born in his mind..
But then she flew,
because
he cut her wings  ...



RS:)
 
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5 comments:

  1. Stan SkiFebruary 6, 2013 at 10:24 AM

    And now she's free...?

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  2. Sheilagh LeeFebruary 6, 2013 at 11:12 AM

    Almost sounds like abuse. am I right?

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  3. Alice AudreyFebruary 6, 2013 at 1:53 PM

    Interesting way this reflects itself.

    Great use of three words. Please read my attempt.

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  4. Lady In ReadFebruary 6, 2013 at 10:07 PM

    yes, i do hope she is free and tasting both the good and bad tidings of her ideas:)
    enjoyed the read

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  5. D.M. SOLISFebruary 7, 2013 at 7:44 PM

    Intriguing perspectives--parallel realities. Nice.

    Thank you for posting. Peace and all good things for you in poetry and in life.

    Diane

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