My 695th Post
Added for
One Single Impression -Sunday
prompt: Charisma\
Written for
Added for
One Single Impression -Sunday
prompt: Charisma\
Written for
Haiku Heights - Saturday
prompt: Pride
prompt: Pride
and
shared with
Haiku My Heart - Friday
( Thanks to MMT for guiding me there..)
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Charisma
Her one smile,
thousands of Suns shine;
charisma..
Charisma;
I look in mirror,
she smiles back
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Charisma
Her one smile,
thousands of Suns shine;
charisma..
Charisma;
I look in mirror,
she smiles back
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She Paints Joy..
She takes pride
in her work with soul;
glow in eyes
Glow in eyes
and smile on her face;
she paints joy
She paints joy;
happy colours drip,
on my palm
On my palm
I let her dreams dance;
she is quiet
She is quiet
unfazed, stronger;
glow in eyes
Glow in eyes;
in her work with soul,
she takes pride..
RS:)
Great words to be proud of.
ReplyDeleteArtistic lines really :-)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written .... and 695 posts ??? WOW !!!
ReplyDeleteNice flow to this .
ReplyDeletePainting joy must be one of life's most precious experiences!
ReplyDeleteBeggar and Buddha
Your words paint joy...
ReplyDeleteso soft and artistic ♥
Ramesh,
ReplyDeleteYou've painted a beautiful word picture.
This is a great demonstration of pride.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed your piece on charisma.. an unique perspective..
ReplyDeleteCharismatic poem indeed!
ReplyDeletenice work!
ReplyDeleteLovely and soothing...thank you. Enjoyed reading your post.
ReplyDeletePeace,
Siggi
Beautiful imagery throughout Ramesh and congratulations on your latest blog milestone.
ReplyDeleteCharisma is catching isn't it? I like this.
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wow! your 695th post is wonderful - :)
ReplyDeletewow! Both the takes Charisma as well as pride, happy colours drips on my palm. Contagious!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on your 695th post! Terrific haiku too. :-)
ReplyDeleteEliz
The glow of pride is well stated in your haiku. Nicely done.
ReplyDeletePS:I'm testing the waters:
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with a new blog idea.
Hope you'll stop in soon Ramesh.
Ramesh, as you know, I don't often comment, but this is such a lovely sestina, full of joy and creativity. Your writing skills grow and grow.
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