Friday, February 22, 2013

Monday Comes Laughing..


Written for

Rebecca's Haiku My Heart - Friday
(Picking up last line from Rebecca's cascading haiku
to start my haiku cascade here..)
 
Leo's Haiku Heights - Saturday
 
Andree and Sandy's OSI - Sunday..
 
 
Monday Comes Laughing
 
Marry each moment,
give birth to joy, happiness;
stars shimmer in sky
 
Stars shimmer in sky;
Moon plays hide and seek behind
bunch of floating clouds
 
Bunch of floating clouds
move along with happy winds,
her golden strands sway
 
Her golden strands sway;
a cup of tea in his hands
and she takes a sip
 
And she takes a sip
Saturday and Sunday pass,
Monday comes laughing
 
Monday comes laughing;
time keeps ticking, hey, let me
marry each moment... 
 
 
RS:)
 
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33 comments:

  1. KarenFebruary 22, 2013 at 10:06 AM

    Love the form!

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  2. Lisa at GreenbowFebruary 22, 2013 at 10:50 AM

    I love the way you went around. It is so encouraging. Beautifully written.

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  3. MaritFebruary 22, 2013 at 11:08 AM

    Laughing Mondays and happy winds... that's the spirit Ramesh! Love your cascading haiku!

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  4. Amrit SinhaFebruary 22, 2013 at 11:18 AM

    Marryying each moment ... wow, that was lovely !!!

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  5. SpadomanFebruary 22, 2013 at 11:51 AM

    Very nice. I have read Rebecca's, and i have read yours. These two could be married as well.

    Peace

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  6. LauraFebruary 22, 2013 at 2:12 PM

    beautifully interwoven Ramesh:-)

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2013 at 3:02 PM

    Lovely cascading haibun ~ very creative ^_^

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2013 at 6:04 PM

    I loved 'marry each moment' when Rebecca said it, and I love it here too!

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  9. MarkFebruary 23, 2013 at 4:17 AM

    Marrying each moment is an art that some of us have not yet mastered...

    Building Sand Castles

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  10. Woman'n'BeyondFebruary 23, 2013 at 8:36 AM

    Wow! Such flowing emotions, every haiku passing on the batonto the next so seamlessly. I enjoyed marrying each moment.

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  11. PranitaFebruary 23, 2013 at 8:39 AM

    U make the mundane seem so full of life! Learning to view world through your eyes is a gift :)

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  12. Susan DanielsFebruary 23, 2013 at 8:49 AM

    Each of these haiku is a perfectly smithed haiku in a lovely chain. Glad I visited to see the silver shimmer of that chain!

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  13. AnonymousFebruary 23, 2013 at 8:55 AM

    I love the flow of this cascade. With this haiku, Monday will come laughing with joy to us.

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  14. Priti LisaFebruary 23, 2013 at 8:56 AM

    Beautiful way you continued
    Rebecca's line
    into a whole new week.
    I love the way you write a story
    only telling the important parts.
    Laughing Monday♥♥

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  15. HazelFebruary 23, 2013 at 9:16 AM

    I'd love to be a spectator of the moon playing hide and seek.

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  16. AnonymousFebruary 23, 2013 at 10:01 AM

    A beautiful haiku Ramesh. Deep appreciation of life and love.

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  17. anthonynorthFebruary 23, 2013 at 10:52 AM

    Enjoyed them all, rounded off by a perfect last line.

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  18. ReshmaFebruary 23, 2013 at 1:16 PM

    Marvelous wordplay!! Life is filled with such joyous moments, if only we could marry each moment...

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  19. SandyCarlsonFebruary 23, 2013 at 7:21 PM

    This is great!

    Just a reminder that your prompt "unlimited" comes up at OSI next week, March 3. Please provide me with a poem or image for the home page.

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  20. Sri ValliFebruary 23, 2013 at 8:10 PM

    Very beautiful cascading haiku!
    I enjoyed reading Moon playing hide and seek, wonderful thought!

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  21. Harshad MehtaFebruary 24, 2013 at 2:55 AM

    Wonderful work!

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  22. Gillena CoxFebruary 24, 2013 at 8:06 AM

    good advice, marrying moments


    much love...

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  23. The Write GirlFebruary 24, 2013 at 12:44 PM

    "Monday comes laughing" What a joyous poem of celebration and light.

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  24. AnonymousFebruary 24, 2013 at 5:07 PM

    I agree, "Monday comes laughing". DEEEEEEEELIGHTFUL
    what a wonderful sentiment!

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  25. vivinfranceFebruary 25, 2013 at 12:08 AM

    I love the idea of Monday coming laughing. Very cheering! This would also fit the One Single Impression prompt (Monday).

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  26. totomaiFebruary 25, 2013 at 6:35 AM

    cascades! you make the form seem so simple

    got to love mondays! not. haha

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  27. adhi dasFebruary 25, 2013 at 7:14 PM

    Amazing!!all the lines have a magical touch of a wonderful imagination...THx for sharing such superb styles!!WELL DONE! God<3U

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  28. Lady In ReadFebruary 25, 2013 at 9:24 PM

    I am going to marry each moment. inspired by your words.

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  30. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2013 at 7:44 PM

    each haiku a work of art enjoyed them one and all

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  31. UnknownFebruary 27, 2013 at 3:14 AM

    Loved the sequence and the fact that each haiku stands on its own, tyoo. Beautiful!

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  32. AnonymousFebruary 27, 2013 at 1:40 PM

    Beautifully said.
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  33. LocomenteMarch 6, 2013 at 1:13 AM

    The first Haiku splendid!!!

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