Thursday, February 28, 2013

Joy Unlimited



Written for
Rebecca's Haiku My Heart - Friday
 
Leo's Haiku Heights - Saturday
(Prompt: Breeze)
 
  Sandy's & Andree's OSI - Sunday..
Prompt: Unlimited


Joy  Unlimited
 
Joy  unlimited;
morning breeze carries songs
from a fading night…


From a fading night
emerges a glowing dawn;
sunbeams dance on dew


Sunbeams dance on dew;
happy rose opens  its heart,
her touch picks fragrance


 Her touch picks fragrance;
delighted she inhales joy,
eyes gleam and face glows


Eyes gleam and face glows,
she is one with the moment;
Joy unlimited  
 
RS:)

26 comments:

  1. Words brought perfectly around to meet again.

    Peace

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  2. One with the moment is the best place to be, or so I've heard. I rarely am...

    Old Willow Woman

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  3. A full circle of joy Ramesh! Enjoy the day, enjoy the weekend.

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  4. A lovely cascading haiku with a wise message, to live in the moment.

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  5. unlimited enjoyment reading your poem!

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  6. This is so uplifting. It makes me for joyful reading it.

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  7. Joy unlimited ... a perfect way to live life !!!

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  8. So soft and utterly romantic. Almost like a psalm

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  9. No limit to how much joy
    one may enjoy...
    it's a bottomless pot ♥♥

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  10. A lovely circle dance of words ~ Joy haiku ~ what an enlightened soul you must be ^_^

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  11. Thank you for the reminder: We are part of it all.

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  12. I'd like to be one with the moment' as often as possible!

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  13. dear ramesh,
    this is absolutely gorgeous! with your tender words you have filled each reader with JOY! thank you for your place in my haiku heart!

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  14. Nice circle - both of haiku and of time.

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  15. Ah, Ramesh, of all I know you are indeed ONE WITH THE MOMENT.

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  16. Joy indeed. I really enjoyed this one and the imagery captured in your words.

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  17. i like how you tied it all together in the ending it gave it beautiful finality,

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  18. I enjoy your work. I'm pulled along from line to line then stitched in a neat circle. I resonate with the circular form.

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  19. Joy unlimited indeed, wonderfully woven words...

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  20. Ramesh.... I have always enjoyed reading your blog and highly value your comments.

    So here I give away Creative Blogger award to you.

    Please follow this link:
    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/03/creative-blogger-award.html

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  21. being one with the moment almost always bring peace and joy. I enjoyed this very much.

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  22. Nice use of the prompt, Ramish. A very pretty tribute to a lovely lady.

    Thank you for this interesting prompt.
    ..

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  23. Fabulous. Great use of repetition to build theme and momentum through the piece.

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  24. Excellent melding of three haiku.
    Eliz

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