Written for Rebecca's
Haiku My Heart : Friday
And for Leo's
Haiku Heights
and for One Single Impression
'Birds' Soar in My Words..
I hear them sing songs
of so many bright colours;
origami birds
Origami birds
Origami birds
rest quietly on wooden shelf;
she is an artist
She is an artist,
She is an artist,
gives life and wings to paper;
'birds’ soar in my words
'birds’ soar in my words,
'birds’ soar in my words,
cuckoo, linnet and sparrow;
You see them all there
You see them all there
You see them all there
in the vast sky of your mind;
words become love birds..
Words become love birds;
haiku spill around all as
I hear them sing songs…
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Specailly created for One Single Impression
A Golden Cage Hangs
I hear birds sing songs
and cross over to peep in;
a golden cage hangs
A golden cage hangs
in an airy balcony;
trees sway with the wind
Trees sway with the wind,
those residing there are quiet;
helpless I move on..
RS:)
Words become love birds;
haiku spill around all as
I hear them sing songs…
***
Specailly created for One Single Impression
A Golden Cage Hangs
I hear birds sing songs
and cross over to peep in;
a golden cage hangs
A golden cage hangs
in an airy balcony;
trees sway with the wind
Trees sway with the wind,
those residing there are quiet;
helpless I move on..
RS:)
Bravo!
ReplyDeleteTwo artists are better than one...
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What wings and song you gave the birds today as well !
ReplyDeleteHappy Friday !
Yes I did see them. Your singing words showed them to me.
ReplyDeleteDelightful!!!
ReplyDeletebeautiful, lyrical rhythm:-)
ReplyDeletewhat lovely images swell in my mind from your wonderful verse!
ReplyDeleteHow you made those paper birds sing!
ReplyDeleteI love your haiku chains -- so satisfying.
ReplyDeleteoh ramesh,
ReplyDeleteyour haiku "song" is sweet beyond measure!! so glad you are here sharing your joy with us all!
Combining haiku and origami... you are wonderful Ramesh! Enjoy your weekend!
ReplyDeleteYOUR WORDS REFRESHING MINDS....WHAT A VERSE!
ReplyDeletewords become love birds...beautiful set of haiku, very lyrical!
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful composition!
ReplyDeleteShe is an artist,
gives life and wings to paper;
in the vast sky of your mind;
words become love birds
Ahh! These lines are super awesome!!
I feel each piece becoming bird and love and variety and song. A lovely haiku chained origami of poetry.
ReplyDeletea soaring set...I love the words becoming love birds...
ReplyDeleteRamesh, these are so lovely - they make me ashamed of my flippant response to the prompt, but I really am in a rush!
ReplyDeleteYour word circle is
ReplyDeletebeautiful origami
Thank you for sharing!
Love your words and love birds
ReplyDeleteBeautiful imagery in these. I hear them tweeting in my head.
ReplyDeleteThanks for filling my heart with light and breath this morning with your haiku birds.
ReplyDeleteNice Ramesh. They flow like birds in flight. Tigerbrite
ReplyDeleteWonderful, so loving your use of the cross prompt
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Beautiful!
ReplyDeletedelightful!!!
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Free the birds!!!
ReplyDeleteFree the birds!!!
Free the birds!!!
Free the birds!!!
Free the birds!!!
Free the birds!!!
Free the birds!!!
Free the birds!!!
I have on my YouTube a monkey in his cage. I took it while visiting Guatemala and the monkey was in a little garden at our hotel.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=asGhCioHqow&list=UUEjMkA89fSJt4TfR_94fuDg&index=9
I have deleted some negative comments concerning his captivitey. Please pardon the poor video in the beginng. It seems to have deteriorated somewhat from the last time I viewed it.
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It's such a pleasure reading these haiku. I loved both the individual ones and the chain haiku.
ReplyDeleteCheers!
Very lyrical and flowing.
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