Friday, March 29, 2013

Hope Flowers..

 
Haiku My Heart
 
An attempt with 5-3-5 haiku chain
in line with the spirit of the day.....
 
 
Hope Flowers..
 
Quieter tears;
face hides stories of
inner pain
 
Inner pain
makes the heart stronger;
eyes are calm
 
Eyes are calm;
sadness alone plays
hide and seek
 
Hide and seek;
broken mirror says
none hides here
 
None hides here
in vacant spaces;
hope flowers
 
Hope flowers
on the dry surface;
quieter tears
 
 
RS:)



8 comments:

  1. Silent tears are heart-breaking.
    Such a beautiful poem♥♥

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  2. Such a wonderful cascading haiku - and hope at the end, indeed. Love it! Happy Easter Ramesh!

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  3. Lovely haiku Ramesh. Definately in the spirit of the day. Blessings to you.

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  4. Beautiful cascade with a hopeful ending, in the spirit of Easter!

    Supper

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  5. dear ramesh,
    you have truly blessed us with your beauty and tender hope. thank you, may hope always flower.

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  6. This lines are really beautiful... :)

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  7. Your prompt "curtains" comes up at OSI tomorrow. Please send me your poem!

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