Haiku My Heart
An attempt with 5-3-5 haiku chain
in line with the spirit of the day.....
Hope Flowers..
Quieter tears;
face hides stories of
inner pain
Inner pain
makes the heart stronger;
eyes are calm
Eyes are calm;
sadness alone plays
hide and seek
Hide and seek;
broken mirror says
none hides here
None hides here
in vacant spaces;
hope flowers
Hope flowers
on the dry surface;
quieter tears
RS:)
Silent tears are heart-breaking.
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful poem♥♥
I'm glad you end on a note of hope!
ReplyDeleteWhen the Desert Blooms and Tender Sky
Such a wonderful cascading haiku - and hope at the end, indeed. Love it! Happy Easter Ramesh!
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku Ramesh. Definately in the spirit of the day. Blessings to you.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful cascade with a hopeful ending, in the spirit of Easter!
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dear ramesh,
ReplyDeleteyou have truly blessed us with your beauty and tender hope. thank you, may hope always flower.
This lines are really beautiful... :)
ReplyDeleteYour prompt "curtains" comes up at OSI tomorrow. Please send me your poem!
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