Sunday, March 31, 2013

Fire Gives Light

 
 
Written today for my own prompt: Curtains
had forgotten to write and hence a bit late to post
Just like always a spontaneous flow of thougths here..
A chain in 3-5-3 haiku format..
 
 
Fire Gives Light
 
No curtains
on any window;
she looks out
 
she looks out;
sun and air enter
happily
 
Happily
starts another day;
she feels good
 
She feels good
mind falters again;
doubts arise
 
doubts arise;
she draws curtains of
illusion
 
Illusion
hangs on mind's window;
she is sad
 
She is sad; 
standing in window
she looks out
 
she looks out;
light does not reach her
inner space
 
Inner space;
burns curtains of doubt,
fire gives light
 
Fire gives light;
a smiling moon waves,
she smiles back
 
 
RS:)
 
 

5 comments:

  1. Great use of curtains for moods.

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  2. I love these transitions. So often a day, my day is like this, moving through so many thoughts and emotions! Well done!

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  3. Love the elliptical path her thoughts take!

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