Written today for my own prompt: Curtains
had forgotten to write and hence a bit late to post
Just like always a spontaneous flow of thougths here..
A chain in 3-5-3 haiku format..
A chain in 3-5-3 haiku format..
Fire Gives Light
No curtains
on any window;
she looks out
she looks out;
sun and air enter
happily
Happily
starts another day;
she feels good
She feels good
mind falters again;
doubts arise
doubts arise;
she draws curtains of
illusion
Illusion
hangs on mind's window;
she is sad
She is sad;
standing in window
she looks out
she looks out;
light does not reach her
inner space
Inner space;
burns curtains of doubt,
fire gives light
Fire gives light;
a smiling moon waves,
she smiles back
RS:)
At last, she smiles! Good one.
ReplyDeleteGreat use of curtains for moods.
ReplyDeleteI love these transitions. So often a day, my day is like this, moving through so many thoughts and emotions! Well done!
ReplyDeleteLove the elliptical path her thoughts take!
ReplyDeleteFelt good reading
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