Sunday, March 31, 2013

His Quieter Ascent ..


Day 01 - Ascent



His Quieter Ascent..

His quieter ascent
vindicates my silent slide;
I find my lost feet

I find my lost feet;
where I had left them alone;
false wings fascinate

 

RS:)
 
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11 comments:

  1. PranitaApril 1, 2013 at 3:57 AM

    So serene and touching!!!
    Ascent to surface

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  2. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 1, 2013 at 5:04 AM

    I'm so glad you found your lost feet!!!



    Ascent

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  3. AnonymousApril 1, 2013 at 7:18 AM

    I like the mystery in the ascent juxtaposed with the false wings!

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  4. Sankara Jayanth SApril 1, 2013 at 7:34 AM

    delightful and insightful haiku! leaving the firm footing due to a fascination for false wings is a very common thing we see ourselves doing. what a piece of wisdom you expressed here!

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  5. AnonymousApril 1, 2013 at 8:51 AM

    Beautiful!

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  6. SimranApril 1, 2013 at 9:24 AM

    Your Haiku always have a powerful touch of emotions. Beautiful! :)

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  7. AnonymousApril 1, 2013 at 11:43 AM

    Powerful and poignant

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  8. ClaudiaApril 1, 2013 at 9:15 PM

    Beautiful reminder of humility.

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  9. Amrit SinhaApril 1, 2013 at 11:49 PM

    I loved the last line :-)

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  10. lishanaApril 2, 2013 at 9:42 AM

    Beautiful..

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  11. ChèvrefeuilleApril 2, 2013 at 11:27 AM

    Nicely written Ramesh.

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