Written for
Rebecca's
Haiku My
Heart : Friday
And
for Leo's
Haiku
Heights : Cacophony
and for
Sandy and Andree's
One
Single Impression -Sunday
Clandestine
Joy Blooms Happiness
Her clandestine moves
create cacophony in mind;
I pluck many doubts
I pluck many doubts,
I pluck many doubts,
yet some are blooming quietly;
she is transparent
She is transparent,
She is transparent,
cacophony melts away;
I hear her heart beat
I hear her heart beat
I hear her heart beat
making doubts wither away;
I sow seeds of joy
I sow seeds of joy
I sow seeds of joy
fertile mind responds well,
joy blooms happiness..
RS:)
And it is always possible...Yes..
You make it possible Sir :-)
ReplyDeletedear ramesh,
ReplyDeleteyour haiku blooms in happiness too! enjoy a beautiful weekend. thank you for gracing mine.
Lovely Ramesh.
ReplyDeleteThis brought a deep meaning to me today, thinking immediately that the cacophony I hear is from my own heart. I have grown used to the sound.
ReplyDeletePeace
I like the idea of joy bringing forth beautiful blooms!
ReplyDeleteSwallows Haiku
Yes ! Joy blooms into happiness ! You have captured that here beautifully.
ReplyDeleteHappy weekend!
Lovely haiku chain. Again. You always delight me with your words.
ReplyDelete"I pluck many doubts" - that's a WONDERFUL line. Your haiku always tell a wonderful story. Great chain.
ReplyDeleteGreat feel good haiku.
ReplyDeleteVery happy feeling! Excellent Haiku set
ReplyDeleteDoubts are always noisy!
ReplyDeletePlucking doubts like harp strings...
ReplyDeletewow, your poetry is just so brilliant!
I always must re-read♥♥
you came through and around to pure joy. lovely.
ReplyDeletelovely, diverse set!
ReplyDeletejoy!!!!
ReplyDeletewonderful!
What a happy, triumphant ending Ramesh. Beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteSheer delight of reading pure poetry, that how I would describe my experience reading this piece.
ReplyDeleteI can only thank everyone for such encouraging feedback... It makes me get lucky as God helps me weave my haiku poems so that they would continue to delight...
ReplyDeleteGod bless!!!
RS:)
Beautiful piece of work.
ReplyDeleteSome poems are a delight to read. One of those :)
fertile mind responds well. joy blooms happiness.........
ReplyDeletevery nice. lovely poem.