Tuesday, June 18, 2013

Haiku Heights: Enigma

 
 
Enigma? Who?
 
 
 
The dreamer in me;
 Moon in his hands, Sun in eyes,
really, who is he?
 
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And one just stemmed from my heart
as I was about to publish
 
 
He holds her
in his curvy smile;
awe-struck she
 
 
 
RS:)
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13 comments:

  1. saniyaJune 18, 2013 at 9:04 AM

    Wonderful. Keep the dreamer alive always. Thanks for dropping by my blog

    Sania at Embracing Dawn

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  2. Magical Mystical TeacherJune 18, 2013 at 9:38 AM

    ...and to this enigma there is, perhaps, no answer...

    Orange Enigma

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  3. AnonymousJune 18, 2013 at 10:24 AM

    Ow,simply wonderful

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  4. AnonymousJune 18, 2013 at 1:55 PM

    What a joy though to discover the dreamer within! Lovely!Mystery

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  5. ReshmaJune 18, 2013 at 5:31 PM

    Dreams have no boundaries and the human mind is indeed an enigma.

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  6. AnonymousJune 18, 2013 at 9:28 PM

    Aw Ramesh, these are beautiful :)

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  7. Maggie GraceJune 18, 2013 at 9:54 PM

    The dreamer...a wonderful part of each of us.

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  8. J Cosmo NewberyJune 19, 2013 at 1:27 AM

    Who indeed. I think we all ask that question.

    Notes on a Serviette

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  9. UnknownJune 19, 2013 at 2:00 AM

    Wow RS Very captivating Haiku. The second one is commedable and exemplary.

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  10. darkfoamJune 19, 2013 at 11:09 AM

    Indeed indeed, who are we?
    Your second haiku? Wow!

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  11. RafaelJune 20, 2013 at 12:05 PM

    I know who!!! You're on first, right? HaHa...sorry:(

    Your second 'ku is super sexy... YUMMY:D

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  12. AnonymousJune 20, 2013 at 7:38 PM

    "Moon in his hands, Sun in eyes" What a vivid and sensual line! Good work. You have such a romantic way with haiku.

    My HH link:
    http://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2013/06/20/gives-to-save-the-whales/

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  13. UnknownJune 21, 2013 at 2:20 AM

    Another good work Ramesh..... Nice take
    (http://blogatcynthia.blogspot.in/2013/06/after-death-enigma.html)

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