Tuesday, June 18, 2013

Haiku Heights: Enigma

 
 
Enigma? Who?
 
 
 
The dreamer in me;
 Moon in his hands, Sun in eyes,
really, who is he?
 
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And one just stemmed from my heart
as I was about to publish
 
 
He holds her
in his curvy smile;
awe-struck she
 
 
 
RS:)

13 comments:

  1. Wonderful. Keep the dreamer alive always. Thanks for dropping by my blog

    Sania at Embracing Dawn

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  2. ...and to this enigma there is, perhaps, no answer...

    Orange Enigma

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  3. What a joy though to discover the dreamer within! Lovely!Mystery

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  4. Dreams have no boundaries and the human mind is indeed an enigma.

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  5. Aw Ramesh, these are beautiful :)

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  6. The dreamer...a wonderful part of each of us.

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  7. Wow RS Very captivating Haiku. The second one is commedable and exemplary.

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  8. Indeed indeed, who are we?
    Your second haiku? Wow!

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  9. I know who!!! You're on first, right? HaHa...sorry:(

    Your second 'ku is super sexy... YUMMY:D

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  10. "Moon in his hands, Sun in eyes" What a vivid and sensual line! Good work. You have such a romantic way with haiku.

    My HH link:
    http://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2013/06/20/gives-to-save-the-whales/

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  11. Another good work Ramesh..... Nice take
    (http://blogatcynthia.blogspot.in/2013/06/after-death-enigma.html)

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