Thursday, June 13, 2013

Haiku: A Tear of Her Eye


Haiku Heights : Ripples
 
 
Shared With Haiku My Heart
 
 
 
 
A tear of her eye
sends ripples before it falls;
rose quietly quivers
 
 
 
RS:)
 
 
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18 comments:

  1. Kinara :)June 14, 2013 at 12:48 AM

    Poignant..

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  2. rallentandaJune 14, 2013 at 3:23 AM

    Exquisite Ramesh.

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  3. SpadomanJune 14, 2013 at 3:33 AM

    I realized I think too much. I immediately wanted to know why she is crying. It makes no difference. I don't know her anyway. Very good.


    Peace

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  4. MaritJune 14, 2013 at 4:17 AM

    Such a 'silent' haiku that says so much, wonderful Ramesh!

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  5. AnonymousJune 14, 2013 at 5:14 AM

    Very poignant haiku! Haiku My Heart Raining

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  6. rebeccaJune 14, 2013 at 6:27 AM

    you have captured the comfort of knowing we are never alone. even the air breaths with us, as the rose quivers beside us.

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  7. Priti LisaJune 14, 2013 at 6:28 AM

    I like the q words together...
    and sending ripples,
    I felt them.
    ♥♥

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  8. AnonymousJune 14, 2013 at 7:45 AM

    Nicely captured moment!

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  9. KarenJune 14, 2013 at 7:59 AM

    Perfect obsevation of a tear about to fall. A touching haiku.

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  10. gmaJune 14, 2013 at 8:16 AM

    From the heart.

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  11. Magical Mystical TeacherJune 14, 2013 at 9:47 AM

    Ah, I pity the poor rose!

    Ripening Seeds

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  12. MeriJune 14, 2013 at 9:50 AM

    tears stream silently
    chest rises and falls with sighs
    and then, one foot forward

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  13. ReshmaJune 14, 2013 at 2:23 PM

    Beautifully crafted... deep hurt sometimes does that, quivering in silence...

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  14. UnknownJune 14, 2013 at 10:06 PM

    RS This is unique!! Saying someting and leaving a lot to imaginatio.

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  15. PanchaliJune 15, 2013 at 5:37 AM

    Awww...the second one is soul-stirring, Ramesh. It was so easy to relate to it...:)

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  16. AnonymousJune 15, 2013 at 3:54 PM

    very nice wet eyes and then the rose.

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  17. AnonymousJune 16, 2013 at 1:41 PM

    Very sweet.

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  18. UnknownJune 17, 2013 at 1:46 AM

    Exquisite. One word to describe your Haiku !!!

    (www.blogatcynthia.blogspot.in)

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