Thursday, June 13, 2013

Haiku: A Tear of Her Eye


Haiku Heights : Ripples
 
 
Shared With Haiku My Heart
 
 
 
 
A tear of her eye
sends ripples before it falls;
rose quietly quivers
 
 
 
RS:)
 
 

19 comments:

  1. I realized I think too much. I immediately wanted to know why she is crying. It makes no difference. I don't know her anyway. Very good.


    Peace

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  2. Such a 'silent' haiku that says so much, wonderful Ramesh!

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  3. you have captured the comfort of knowing we are never alone. even the air breaths with us, as the rose quivers beside us.

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  4. I like the q words together...
    and sending ripples,
    I felt them.
    ♥♥

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  5. Perfect obsevation of a tear about to fall. A touching haiku.

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  6. tears stream silently
    chest rises and falls with sighs
    and then, one foot forward

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  7. Beautifully crafted... deep hurt sometimes does that, quivering in silence...

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  8. RS This is unique!! Saying someting and leaving a lot to imaginatio.

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  9. Awww...the second one is soul-stirring, Ramesh. It was so easy to relate to it...:)

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  10. very nice wet eyes and then the rose.

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  11. Exquisite. One word to describe your Haiku !!!

    (www.blogatcynthia.blogspot.in)

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