Tuesday, June 4, 2013

Unpredictable : Haiku





Prompt: Eccentric



Unpredictable
she laughs, cries, laughs and cries;
people shun, Moon smiles...



RS:)

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14 comments:

  1. UnknownJune 4, 2013 at 11:21 PM

    RS this is simply fabulous Very appropriate.

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  2. ekta khetanJune 5, 2013 at 2:48 AM

    loved this one!

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  3. UnknownJune 5, 2013 at 8:36 AM

    Lovely..... :)

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  4. AnonymousJune 5, 2013 at 9:56 AM

    Very nice! Thank you for visiting www.haikubyku.com

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  5. AnonymousJune 5, 2013 at 10:20 AM

    This is a fine take on the prompt

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  6. LollyJune 5, 2013 at 10:25 AM

    ahh, the old moon is often the reason for the "lunacy." Well done. I enjoyed this one very much.

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  7. AnonymousJune 5, 2013 at 10:28 AM

    I love it especially that last line!!!

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  8. AnonymousJune 5, 2013 at 5:41 PM

    What a lovely haiku. She sounds like an interesting person is the moon laughs.

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  9. AnonymousJune 5, 2013 at 5:52 PM

    Very clever!Outlier

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  10. Siggi in Downeast MaineJune 5, 2013 at 8:37 PM

    I agree...Very clever...good twist on the prompt.
    Peace,
    Siggi

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  11. grapelingJune 5, 2013 at 9:31 PM

    Succinct and vivid - well done

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  12. Susie ClevengerJune 5, 2013 at 9:36 PM

    So fitting...love it!

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  13. vivinfranceJune 5, 2013 at 10:12 PM

    An eccentric haiku in spirit as well as words.

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  14. AnonymousJune 7, 2013 at 5:10 AM

    Good take on eccentricity. A world of one's own.

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