Tuesday, June 4, 2013

Unpredictable : Haiku





Prompt: Eccentric



Unpredictable
she laughs, cries, laughs and cries;
people shun, Moon smiles...



RS:)

14 comments:

  1. RS this is simply fabulous Very appropriate.

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  2. loved this one!

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  3. Very nice! Thank you for visiting www.haikubyku.com

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  4. This is a fine take on the prompt

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  5. ahh, the old moon is often the reason for the "lunacy." Well done. I enjoyed this one very much.

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  6. I love it especially that last line!!!

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  7. What a lovely haiku. She sounds like an interesting person is the moon laughs.

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  8. I agree...Very clever...good twist on the prompt.
    Peace,
    Siggi

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  9. Succinct and vivid - well done

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  10. An eccentric haiku in spirit as well as words.

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  11. Good take on eccentricity. A world of one's own.

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