Friday, October 25, 2013

Childhood - Haiku



Written for

Haiku Heights : Rummage
and shared with Haiku My Heart


emptied on the floor
a drawer lies next to me;
my childhood crawls out




Added on Sunday especially for Haiku Heights



my intense search fails
for that first ever letter;
she reads from her mind


RS:)


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14 comments:

  1. Gillena CoxOctober 25, 2013 at 12:13 PM

    nice one; have a good weekend

    much love...

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  2. AnonymousOctober 25, 2013 at 3:02 PM

    metaphorically it sometimes happen that way ~ huh? Lovely haiku ~ happy weekend to you ~ carol

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  3. AnonymousOctober 25, 2013 at 3:14 PM

    Oh my! I hope it wasn't some critters you stashed away long ago! :)

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  4. Magical Mystical TeacherOctober 25, 2013 at 4:47 PM

    This is simply delightful, Ramesh! I love it! (It would make a great children's picture-book story.)

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  5. kalpana solsiOctober 26, 2013 at 3:00 AM

    This is so lovely RS. My childhood crawls out.

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  6. UnknownOctober 27, 2013 at 1:29 AM

    The childhood crawling out, this is your master stroke. Too good!

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  7. AnonymousOctober 27, 2013 at 8:16 AM

    A most excellent image! Well done.

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  8. ReshmaOctober 27, 2013 at 9:51 AM

    childhood crawling out presents such a nice picture, brilliant take on the prompt RS :)

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  9. kalpana solsiOctober 27, 2013 at 10:22 AM

    The second one is intense. Hope the letter is not full of pain.

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  10. LauraOctober 27, 2013 at 2:55 PM

    The first haiku touched me deeply Ramesh.

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  11. UnknownOctober 29, 2013 at 11:42 AM

    Amazing what we can find amid the clutter in a drawer. Brilliant.

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  12. LocomenteOctober 30, 2013 at 3:04 AM

    2nd one is a beauty...
    So beautiful!!!

    Plz follow the link for mine:
    http://locomente.blogspot.com/2013/10/alcoholic.html

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  13. Lisa at GreenbowOctober 30, 2013 at 6:03 AM

    It seems we all have a drawer or box of childhood treasures. Fun read. It opened the treasure box of my mind regarding childhood.

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  14. UnknownOctober 31, 2013 at 7:03 AM

    I especially like the line "my childhood crawls out." Great job!

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