Friday, October 4, 2013

Her Trembling Hands..Haiku




Written for
Rebecca's Haiku My Heart..



Eyes lock;
her trembling hands
spill tea..


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Birds sing
songs of flowers;
lyrical winds


RS:)

12 comments:

  1. The spilled tea seems to me to be a powerful symbol of love.

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  2. The spilled tea makes it all come together, lovely haiku!

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  3. {{ i must say
    your passion
    is wonderfully displayed
    here
    with amazing regularity !!


    thank goodness }}

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  4. So glad to 'see you again' and your very creative haiku ~ beauty and divine in the simplicity ~ both say so much ~ Happy Weekend to you!

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  5. The image of the spilled tea resonates deeply. Beautiful !
    Happy friday !

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  6. 'Spill tea' spells a charming lot!

    Hazel

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  7. just awesome; have a nice Friday

    much love...

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  8. The tremble was her thoughts spilling over, beautifully composed RS:) And the lyrical winds are really soothing.Back here after a while, will surely come back and read the lovely verses I have missed out so far...

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  9. Ah!
    I loved the 1st one...
    Bautiful haiku sir :)

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  10. dear ramesh,
    thank you for singing your heart out and the gift of your JOY!

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  11. Lovely haiku! I specially liked the first one. :)
    Thanks a lot for visiting my blog and commenting. :) Thanks a ton.

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