Saturday, October 12, 2013

Joy Painted by God.... Haiku




Written for Haiku Heights
& Haiku My Heart..



Shining stepping stones
to quiet heavenly space;
white pieces of clouds


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I soar above clouds
thinking and talking haiku;
joy painted by God


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Blue meets shining grey;
nearer heavens my eyes see
a thin line divide..


and one from my archives..


From the other side
I see sun shine on them;
thundering black clouds




RS:)

23 comments:

  1. You words have taken me soaring into the most distant reaches of the universe. Nice haiku!

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  2. Second verse - I love how I feel like I'm singing a hymn with your words.

    Hazel

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  3. i think and talk haiku,
    yes.
    and you do this with loyalty and true finesse!

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  4. "talk Haiku"...I really like that.

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  5. Your haiku spoke to me above the clouds. Thank you for taking me there.

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  6. Love the 2nd one -- and the heights it takes me! Thank you, Rameesh for sharing with us!

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  7. Shining stepping stones
    to quiet heavenly space;
    white pieces of clouds
    and I can see a fairy stepping on each of the stones.
    a very different take on the prompt.

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  8. I like the idea of a celestial Ramesh speaking in haiku. Must be hellish for the cab drivers and shop keepers understanding you on earth:)

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    1. Oh, No Cressida de Nova.. I keep chatting with them about all that can be heavenly on Earth...it helps to stay grounded...yet, one must get wings to fly occasionally to stay in touch with the world beyond clouds..pious and pure world..

      RS

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  9. Joy painted by God ... so true !!!

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  10. I somehow felt very peaceful on reading your first haiku Rameshji, the picture of heading to heaven with clouds as stepping stones is very beautiful.

    Pls visit: http://njn-sorceress.blogspot.in/

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  11. Hi Sood,
    SO glad to be back again
    Keep posting
    Best Regards
    Philip Ariel

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  12. I enjoyed all of these but the stepping stones the most.

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  13. I loved each of your haiku...
    Beautiful!

    Here goes my try on the prompt..
    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/10/i-walk.html

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  14. Oh; to walk among the clouds, Wow!

    much love...

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  15. Lovely take on the prompt. I liked the third one the most.

    To read my try on the prompt pls. visit http://geetaavij.wordpress.com/2013/10/18/water-droplets-in-the-air-3/

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  16. Nearer heavens indeed, beautifully composed RS :)

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  17. A much happier take on the prompt - like a psalm.

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