Saturday, October 12, 2013

Joy Painted by God.... Haiku




Written for Haiku Heights
& Haiku My Heart..



Shining stepping stones
to quiet heavenly space;
white pieces of clouds


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I soar above clouds
thinking and talking haiku;
joy painted by God


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Blue meets shining grey;
nearer heavens my eyes see
a thin line divide..


and one from my archives..


From the other side
I see sun shine on them;
thundering black clouds




RS:)

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22 comments:

  1. J COctober 12, 2013 at 5:21 AM

    You words have taken me soaring into the most distant reaches of the universe. Nice haiku!

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  2. HazelOctober 12, 2013 at 6:45 AM

    Second verse - I love how I feel like I'm singing a hymn with your words.

    Hazel

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  3. rebeccaOctober 12, 2013 at 7:45 AM

    i think and talk haiku,
    yes.
    and you do this with loyalty and true finesse!

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  4. AnonymousOctober 12, 2013 at 8:51 AM

    "talk Haiku"...I really like that.

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  5. gmaOctober 12, 2013 at 9:24 AM

    Your haiku spoke to me above the clouds. Thank you for taking me there.

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  6. AnonymousOctober 12, 2013 at 9:39 AM

    Love the 2nd one -- and the heights it takes me! Thank you, Rameesh for sharing with us!

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  7. kalpana solsiOctober 12, 2013 at 11:55 AM

    Shining stepping stones
    to quiet heavenly space;
    white pieces of clouds
    and I can see a fairy stepping on each of the stones.
    a very different take on the prompt.

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  8. Cressida de NovaOctober 12, 2013 at 6:57 PM

    I like the idea of a celestial Ramesh speaking in haiku. Must be hellish for the cab drivers and shop keepers understanding you on earth:)

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    1. Ramesh SoodOctober 12, 2013 at 8:53 PM

      Oh, No Cressida de Nova.. I keep chatting with them about all that can be heavenly on Earth...it helps to stay grounded...yet, one must get wings to fly occasionally to stay in touch with the world beyond clouds..pious and pure world..

      RS

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  9. Amrit SinhaOctober 13, 2013 at 5:07 AM

    Joy painted by God ... so true !!!

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  10. Sanjana October 13, 2013 at 7:08 AM

    I somehow felt very peaceful on reading your first haiku Rameshji, the picture of heading to heaven with clouds as stepping stones is very beautiful.

    Pls visit: http://njn-sorceress.blogspot.in/

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  11. UnknownOctober 13, 2013 at 9:35 AM

    i liked all
    keep it up

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  12. Philip Verghese 'Ariel'October 13, 2013 at 1:29 PM

    Hi Sood,
    SO glad to be back again
    Keep posting
    Best Regards
    Philip Ariel

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  13. AnonymousOctober 14, 2013 at 10:54 AM

    I enjoyed all of these but the stepping stones the most.

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  14. LocomenteOctober 15, 2013 at 4:28 AM

    I loved each of your haiku...
    Beautiful!

    Here goes my try on the prompt..
    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/10/i-walk.html

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  15. Magical Mystical TeacherOctober 15, 2013 at 5:45 AM

    God-painted joy is the very best!

    Plum Clouds

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  16. PanchaliOctober 15, 2013 at 6:34 AM

    aha...joy indeed :) lovely....

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  17. AnonymousOctober 15, 2013 at 8:54 AM

    Simply wonderful, Ramesh.

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  18. Gillena CoxOctober 18, 2013 at 4:20 AM

    Oh; to walk among the clouds, Wow!

    much love...

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  19. UnknownOctober 18, 2013 at 11:34 AM

    Lovely take on the prompt. I liked the third one the most.

    To read my try on the prompt pls. visit http://geetaavij.wordpress.com/2013/10/18/water-droplets-in-the-air-3/

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  20. ReshmaOctober 18, 2013 at 5:36 PM

    Nearer heavens indeed, beautifully composed RS :)

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  21. vivinfranceOctober 20, 2013 at 12:30 PM

    A much happier take on the prompt - like a psalm.

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