Sunday, October 13, 2013

I Tear It Apart...Haiku



Written for Haiku Heights

Prompt: Cloud..



I tear it apart
searching for pearls of water;
cloud melts like a doubt



RS:)

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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 13, 2013 at 6:15 AM

    I love the imagery here! Nicely done.

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  2. kalpana solsiOctober 13, 2013 at 6:27 AM

    WOW! Lovely haiku. and doubts should melt away.

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  3. Judith WesterfieldOctober 13, 2013 at 2:12 PM

    WONDERFUL!

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  4. AnonymousOctober 13, 2013 at 10:04 PM

    love it :-)

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  5. AnonymousOctober 14, 2013 at 11:02 AM

    I like the idea of tearing a cloud apart by hand. Lovely.

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  6. Magical Mystical TeacherOctober 15, 2013 at 5:46 AM

    I hope you find the object of your search!

    Plum Clouds

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  7. AnonymousOctober 15, 2013 at 8:55 AM

    This is lovely

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  8. Zainab ZainabOctober 17, 2013 at 2:07 AM

    few words,perfect words.

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  9. ReshmaOctober 18, 2013 at 5:43 PM

    Simply superb RS... Reminds me of how too much rain or too little rain tears apart lives to leave hearts melting in sorrow...

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  10. UnknownOctober 19, 2013 at 1:10 AM

    This one is lovely and expressive too.

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