Sunday, October 13, 2013

I Tear It Apart...Haiku



Written for Haiku Heights

Prompt: Cloud..



I tear it apart
searching for pearls of water;
cloud melts like a doubt



RS:)

11 comments:

  1. I love the imagery here! Nicely done.

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  2. WOW! Lovely haiku. and doubts should melt away.

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  3. I like the idea of tearing a cloud apart by hand. Lovely.

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  4. Please link your Haiku My Heart to Rebecca’s Mornings with Mary: Loving Lupita.

    Let’s keep our haiku community going this Friday, while Rebecca is in San Miguel de Allende. Thank you!

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  5. Simply superb RS... Reminds me of how too much rain or too little rain tears apart lives to leave hearts melting in sorrow...

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  6. This one is lovely and expressive too.

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