Sunday, December 15, 2013

Dew on Grass.... Haiku


Prompt: DEW



She covers
herself with woolens;
dew on grass


dew on grass;
her barefooted
morning walk


Morning walk;
sunbeams quietly steal
pearls of dew

pearls of dew
shine on petals of rose;
ah, night bath

( Inspired by what Leo wrote)


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  Dew on windscreen;
I scribble your name
with my finger


hope you can read it.. 

RS:)



23 comments:

  1. Walking barefoot on damp grass is bliss.

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  2. I loved the entire compilation...
    But last one is a delight!

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  3. Lovely, Ramesh - especially the last. It seems to tie in with the previous prompt:

    with my finger
    scribble your name in dew
    wet rivulets

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  4. 'ah, night bath' is beautiful.. And the last one is just AMAZING !!

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  5. the 3rd one is my favourite

    much love...

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  6. I agree...lovely imagery.
    My favorite is "dew on grass"
    Peace
    Siggi

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  7. Oh my goodness - they are all great but I LOVE THE LAST ONE - wonderful imagery.

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  8. Going with the crowd, loved them all, but the last one was a cracker.

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  9. I find the name scribbled on the windscreen charming!

    Desert Dew

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  10. RS, the last one is simply awesome. A delight to read all of them.

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  11. These are romantic and thick with feelings and imagery. Your words make me want to know her.

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  13. dew on grass;
    her barefooted
    morning walk
    <3

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  14. Dew on the gras can really create wonderful imagery.

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