Exquisite, Magnificent, Crisp
I See a Candle Getting Lit..
None can take away
the joyous vibrations and
the elation one experiences
while saying or hearing
delicious words like
"Magnificently beautiful,
Exquisitely fabulous,
Splendidly glittering
Marvelously glowing...
Wow...it's superb.."
Doesn't matter if winter
descends on some hearts
Yet compliments make
Ice too feel the warmth
Ah, I see a candle getting lit..
**
Her crisp compliment
leaves a magnificent taste;
exquisite timing
RS:)
Clever use of the words Ramesh..wrapped up so expertly and glowingly...and the haiku..the icing on the cake..
ReplyDeleteThanks Jae.. it is always a delight to read you and find you visiting me...here and encouraging too..
DeleteI haven't been around for some time, but I see you are as brilliant as ever.
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku.
Nice poem! I really liked the title...:)
ReplyDeleteWinter descends on some hearts
ReplyDeleteJust to get the right background
The right ambience for a camp fire
With poetry for company
Memories for symphony
And new resolves as the spirit that runs through the spine and warms us up to life anew with intoxicating confidence
Regards
RM
Yeah, the words influence us ... sometimes before we get absorbed them with our brain...~ nice take on the prompt
ReplyDeleteNone indeed can take away those feelings of ours. We own them and they are precious indeed. Words, touch, looks their timing is so important and are felt inside.
ReplyDeleteWarma and beautiful put a smile on my face thank you enjoyed this write. Blessings
ReplyDeletelove how the light shines through.... the 'ku is just as it should be... beautiful
ReplyDeleteAh, but we must resist the temptation to filter the comments through our own cynicism.
ReplyDeletea crisp comment
ReplyDeletea crisp haiku
is
a nice concept
like
a cool heart of a lettuce
Wow
Another slice of haiku magic:)