Friday, December 20, 2013

Gift of Winter - Haiku



Written for 



Rebecca's 
Haiku My Heart

and 

Leo's Haiku Heights



GIFT OF WINTER

a happy cascade of Haiku


Ah, wary earth
moves  away from Sun;
she is real cold

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She is real cold;
sun tries to warm her with the 
gift of winter  

**

Gift of winter;
Christmas time glitters with a 
star studded sky

*

Star studded sky;
smiles, joy, dance, songs , Santa and
a happy earth

**

A happy earth;
sunbeams carry blessings from
heavenly Gods

***

Heavenly Gods
descend on earth to celebrate;
drops of hope rain

**

Drops of hope rain;
she gathers them in her palms
and says, "Thank you!!!"



RS :)


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21 comments:

  1. kalpana solsiDecember 20, 2013 at 10:53 AM

    and says, "Thank you!!!"
    for all blessings
    asked and unasked.

    cascading into a beautiful haiku. loved it RS.

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  2. Magical Mystical TeacherDecember 20, 2013 at 1:09 PM

    A "thank you" is the greatest gift of all!

    Seas, Farmers, and Canals

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  3. LauraDecember 20, 2013 at 1:41 PM

    Drops of hope rain;
    she gathers them in her palms
    and says, "Thank you!!!" so beautiful Ramesh!

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  4. J CDecember 20, 2013 at 1:54 PM

    Gathering drops of hope......I am.

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  5. AnonymousDecember 20, 2013 at 4:29 PM

    Oh I do love your drops of hope! Enjoy this wonderful season!

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  6. Rashmirekha MannaDecember 21, 2013 at 11:45 PM

    Thank you :)
    Here to practice happiness.

    After a long time I see this space and it looks like the same life giving river, glittering, sparkling, inviting, soothing; looks like it is where it was, doing what it did, but she is moving and has touched millions by now with her magic water, the potion of life, the window view to keys of happiness.

    Regards
    RM

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    1. Ramesh SoodDecember 22, 2013 at 1:12 AM

      RM... You are a very kind soul...thanks for your beautiful thoughts and a flawless flowing expression....

      God bless!!!

      RS

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  7. J Cosmo NewberyDecember 22, 2013 at 2:51 AM

    The last line says it all. "and says 'thank you'"

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  8. Lisa at GreenbowDecember 22, 2013 at 4:45 AM

    Thank YOU.

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  9. UnknownDecember 22, 2013 at 4:47 AM

    Flawless and honest. One of the best I have read so far :)
    http://ayusheeghoshal.blogspot.in/2013/12/gift-haiku.html

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  10. Jyotsna BhatiaDecember 22, 2013 at 6:20 AM

    Lovely Ramesh.. So aptly described :)

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  11. UnknownDecember 22, 2013 at 7:14 AM

    Awesome !! All Haiku are splendid.

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  12. AnonymousDecember 22, 2013 at 7:56 AM

    Very nice use of pattern, I especially love the line "drops of hope rain."

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  13. cherylDecember 23, 2013 at 2:40 AM

    I love your cascade Ramesh, Thank YOU! and a very Merry Christmas to you.

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  14. Sumana RoyDecember 23, 2013 at 5:01 AM

    beautiful cascade.....

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  15. AnonymousDecember 23, 2013 at 10:33 AM

    Wonderful!

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  16. ReshmaDecember 23, 2013 at 4:33 PM

    A delightful cascade of priceless gifts, fabulously done as always RS:)

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  17. *Dark Angel*December 24, 2013 at 4:18 AM

    Great imagination :)

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  18. AnonymousDecember 26, 2013 at 8:52 AM

    What a fabulous and thankful cascade. Well done.

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  19. Amrit SinhaDecember 27, 2013 at 12:10 AM

    A beautiful cascade ... loved the lines :-)

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  20. AnonymousJune 27, 2014 at 6:38 AM

    These cascading haiku are so fun to read!

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