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Sunday, December 8, 2013
Rivulet - Haiku
Written for Haiku Heights
Rivulet..
Water spills from glass;
she draws a rivulet
with her finger tip..
This was what I did in my childhood much to the irritation of my mom. very practical one.
ReplyDeleteYes, I can see it:)
ReplyDelete:-) simple..
ReplyDeletewonderful
You can picture the woman in your poem. A perfect haiku Ramesh!
ReplyDeleteSimple, but almost erotic!
ReplyDeleteMy first thought was the same as yours, Viv.
DeleteAmazing!
ReplyDeleteSo few words to create such a sensuous vision
ReplyDeletePerfect.
ReplyDeleteCharming!
ReplyDeleteSo good. Simple yet charming.
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful imagery.
ReplyDeleteBrought back memories of good old days...Nicely done as always RS:)
ReplyDeleteI could see her do that...
ReplyDeleteAwesome as always!!
Please follow the link to read mine:
http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/12/promised-lifetime.html
Wow, Very romantic.
ReplyDeleteWonderful. It looks so real.
ReplyDeleteSimple and real
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