Monday, March 10, 2014

Misunderstanding.. Haiku

Written for Haiku Horizons..

Prompt: Return



 She just can't keep it,
so quietly returns his smile;
 misunderstanding



RS:)

16 comments:

  1. .........and this is how misunderstandings begin.

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  2. lovely imagery ! 5 stars !

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  3. she quietly smiles
    he was not smiling at her
    misunderstanding

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    1. Ha, ha.. I liked it... happens.. I am smiling as I read..and thank God none is around..no chance of misunderstanding..

      RS:)

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  4. Excellently done!

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  5. Ah! Another awesome haiku from u...
    And I like to return here as well sir!

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  6. Some people read way too much in a returned smile!! Awesome haiku. ♥

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  7. This brings me a smile - no misunderstanding here!

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  8. Very true RS, smiles can be quite misleading.

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  9. Cross wires emerge here beautifully.

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  10. A returned smile can get one into trouble, not that I would know. I like this Ramesh, you've delved into humans ooopsies.

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  11. misunderstanding
    I "am" hot or I "have" hot
    French language troubles

    You've out done yourself with this one. Good job.

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  12. Misunderstanding a smile? Be carefull with smiling back.

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