Haiku My Heart..
TEN COCONUT TREES
Sun spills melted gold;
wearing a red hat, she walks
through yellow flowers..
**
Ten coconut trees
stand quietly in a line;
his eyes follow her..
**
A tiny fire burn
with thick bundles of smoke;
they dance through night
**
A bucket falls
in the well, splashing water;
long wait breaks dream
**
Dry rose in the vase;
she runs after a stray dog
with a longish stick..
**
Happier she
stands in her blooming garden;
it is spring time
RS:
These happened.. how, from where and why... I know not..
These happened.. how, from where and why... I know not..
All beautiful Ramesh, the first though, is my favorite.
ReplyDeleteRamesh, you never fail to surprise me. Your lovely haikus always start in one place and end up somewhere else entirely. So much adventure in 17 syllables.
ReplyDelete"Sun spills melted gold" is a magical line. The first is also my favorite
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely story but the first one is my favorite!! :)
ReplyDeletedearest ramesh,
ReplyDeleteyou delight me in the most tender ways. thank you for gracing my heart with your love notes. welcome spring!
He loves her, and she finally loved back.
ReplyDeletewhat a way you have with the syllables of haiku! I like the mental image of the red hat.
ReplyDeleteWhat a delightful and filled with hope series of beautiful haiku ~ xxx
ReplyDeleteartmusedog and carol
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luv this sequence, my favourite 'the coconut trees'
ReplyDeletehave a nice weekend
much love...