Monday, March 17, 2014

To Hell With Level... Haiku..

Haiku for  Haiku Horizon 
Prompt: Level




betrayed & lost,
her heart cries, eyes don't;
ah, maturity!!

Ah, maturity;
I ask her to cry out loud,
to hell with level..


RS:)

9 comments:

  1. So true sir...
    When eyes are tiered of shredding tears, they give up...
    But the poor heart always weep...

    Well said!

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  2. Powerfully done!

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  3. o yes ! who cares when tears flow down ....be it heaven or hell or the purgatory ! sublime !

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  4. What a nice haiku-set Ramesh ... I find it a wonder that you can write such nice haiku on such an abstract prompt as level. Chapeau!

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  5. The scenario of which you speak is all so true, isn't it? Your advice is well spoken. Lovely haiku. Thank you for sharing your great work. :)

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  6. I like this!! Excellent advice given.

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  7. The feelings expressed in this haiku held me. Wonderful work.

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  8. Joy and sorrow have no limits on the levels to which they can move our minds. As always, brilliantly said RS :)

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