Sunday, March 30, 2014

She Leaps to Catch Love...


Blog post # 894

Countdown to 900 begins..


Haiku for Haiku Horizon
Prompt: Trip..




My words trip over
the naughty curve of her smile;
she leaps to catch 'love'




RS:)
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11 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 30, 2014 at 12:41 PM

    wow, a whole romantic story in just three lines
    remarkable !

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  2. AnonymousMarch 30, 2014 at 5:32 PM

    This is fun, flirtatious and fabulous. I enjoyed it a lot.

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  3. rallentandaMarch 30, 2014 at 7:03 PM

    Well..who could top this for seductive ?:) Excellent !

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  4. AnonymousMarch 31, 2014 at 12:15 AM

    Very good description of emotions.

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  5. kaykualaMarch 31, 2014 at 4:05 AM

    Sensuously fascinating. Love can make one react very fast!

    Hank

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  6. AnonymousMarch 31, 2014 at 4:22 AM

    Ow, wow! Beautiful and seductive!

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  7. Sumana RoyMarch 31, 2014 at 6:57 AM

    lovely...

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  8. Judith WesterfieldMarch 31, 2014 at 9:34 PM

    Agree with all the above . . . plus you've really captured physical and emotional movement.

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  9. PanchaliApril 1, 2014 at 9:36 AM

    Ooooh, this is just so romantic, Ramesh! Love this....:)

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  10. cherylApril 1, 2014 at 5:45 PM

    I hope she caught it, lovely Ramesh.

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  11. ReshmaApril 3, 2014 at 7:57 PM

    playful and teasing Haiku, nicely done RS:)

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