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Welcome to the space where the magic of writing Haiku; Poems happens as the words born in my heart flow and quietly spill just like your smile does here in the NOW and I pick it and keep in my heart..
wow, a whole romantic story in just three lines remarkable !
This is fun, flirtatious and fabulous. I enjoyed it a lot.
Well..who could top this for seductive ?:) Excellent !
Very good description of emotions.
Sensuously fascinating. Love can make one react very fast!Hank
Ow, wow! Beautiful and seductive!
Agree with all the above . . . plus you've really captured physical and emotional movement.
Ooooh, this is just so romantic, Ramesh! Love this....:)
I hope she caught it, lovely Ramesh.
playful and teasing Haiku, nicely done RS:)