Monday, June 23, 2014

A Love Story ... Haiku

Written for Haiku Horizons
Prompt: Comfort..

Shared with Haiku My Heart..

A Love Story in a Chain of Haiku...


A real hard pillow ;
he plucks a piece of cloud for 
her dreamy comfort

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Winds arrest him for 
celestial theft of a cloud;
she sleeps in comfort

** 

She sleeps in comfort;
he smiles in the photo 
kept on her bedside ..


RS:)



14 comments:

  1. Lovely sentiments expressed here, Ramesh!

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  2. To make her feel comfortable, he takes so much trouble.Nicely written.

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  3. Nice haiku! The idea of linking haiku poems together, telling a bigger story - that's great! Maybe I will use this idea sometime... And your story is fine - Sacrificing his own comfort for the lady. That's love!

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  4. that was so touching! the guy is no more but his spirit makes sure to make the girl comfortable in every way! niceee!

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  5. captivating ! a touching bouquet !

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  6. Oh that idea of sleeping...dreamy! Lovely collection of haiku!

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  7. Lovely!
    And what a piece of imagination 1st haiku is... Amazing!!!

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  8. The guy is so concerned about her beauty sleep that he dared Nature. Lovely imagination RS.

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  9. She must be on cloud nine having been blessed with so much love!! Loved the story RS :)

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  10. wow! amazingly beautiful love story indeed :) worth reading more than once :)

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  11. What an interesting story! A unique perspective and I liked it very much!

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