Written for Haiku Horizons
Prompt: Comfort..
Shared with Haiku My Heart..
A Love Story in a Chain of Haiku...
A real hard pillow ;
he plucks a piece of cloud for
her dreamy comfort
**
Winds arrest him for
celestial theft of a cloud;
she sleeps in comfort
**
She sleeps in comfort;
he smiles in the photo
kept on her bedside ..
RS:)
Prompt: Comfort..
Shared with Haiku My Heart..
A Love Story in a Chain of Haiku...
A real hard pillow ;
he plucks a piece of cloud for
her dreamy comfort
**
Winds arrest him for
celestial theft of a cloud;
she sleeps in comfort
**
She sleeps in comfort;
he smiles in the photo
kept on her bedside ..
RS:)
Lovely sentiments expressed here, Ramesh!
ReplyDeleteTo make her feel comfortable, he takes so much trouble.Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteNice haiku! The idea of linking haiku poems together, telling a bigger story - that's great! Maybe I will use this idea sometime... And your story is fine - Sacrificing his own comfort for the lady. That's love!
ReplyDeletethat was so touching! the guy is no more but his spirit makes sure to make the girl comfortable in every way! niceee!
ReplyDeletecaptivating ! a touching bouquet !
ReplyDeleteOh that idea of sleeping...dreamy! Lovely collection of haiku!
ReplyDeleteThis is a love story!
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteAnd what a piece of imagination 1st haiku is... Amazing!!!
The guy is so concerned about her beauty sleep that he dared Nature. Lovely imagination RS.
ReplyDeleteShe must be on cloud nine having been blessed with so much love!! Loved the story RS :)
ReplyDeletewow! amazingly beautiful love story indeed :) worth reading more than once :)
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful.
ReplyDeleteCloud thief! But there's comfort for someone... ;)
ReplyDeleteLooking for Comfort
What an interesting story! A unique perspective and I liked it very much!
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