Haiku for Haiku Horizons
Promt : Retreat..
He listens to her
woes, misdeeds and sufferings;
when fine, she retreats
I choose to retreat,
keeping distance from dustbin;
my garbage smells bad
**
My garbage smells bad;
Thank God, the garbageman
does not retreat ..
***
Don't retreat without
sharing your candid thought;
bless me visitor
RS:)
Promt : Retreat..
He listens to her
woes, misdeeds and sufferings;
when fine, she retreats
**
I choose to retreat,
keeping distance from dustbin;
my garbage smells bad
**
My garbage smells bad;
Thank God, the garbageman
does not retreat ..
***
Don't retreat without
sharing your candid thought;
bless me visitor
Your haiku makes me smile! Loved the one about retreating from the dustbins. HA HA HA! Very true!
ReplyDeleteGarbage smells bed and retreating..makes me smile and absolutely fun one. Charming Haiku:)
ReplyDeleteGarbage smells awful. Interesting thougt.
ReplyDeleteI like your take!
ReplyDeleteInteresting! Loved the first one.
ReplyDeleteI am not retreating without sharing my candid thought! :)
ReplyDeleteI liked them all but especially liked the first one as I knew someone like that! Thanks and blessings to you!
:) You surprised me this week! And I am smiling!
ReplyDeleteThank goodness, indeed, for our garbagemen!
ReplyDeleteReally liked these poems. :)
A retreating garbageman would leave you in an awkward, if not smelly, situation!
ReplyDeleteAfternoon Retreat
a bouquet of retreats !
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