Monday, June 2, 2014

When Fine, She Retreats.. Haiku...

Haiku for Haiku Horizons
Promt : Retreat..



He listens to her
woes, misdeeds and sufferings;
when fine, she retreats 

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I choose to retreat,
keeping distance from dustbin;
my garbage smells bad


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My garbage smells bad;
Thank God, the garbageman
does not retreat ..


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Don't retreat without
sharing your candid thought;
bless me visitor



RS:)

10 comments:

  1. Your haiku makes me smile! Loved the one about retreating from the dustbins. HA HA HA! Very true!

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  2. Garbage smells bed and retreating..makes me smile and absolutely fun one. Charming Haiku:)

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  3. Garbage smells awful. Interesting thougt.

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  4. Interesting! Loved the first one.

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  5. I am not retreating without sharing my candid thought! :)
    I liked them all but especially liked the first one as I knew someone like that! Thanks and blessings to you!

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  6. :) You surprised me this week! And I am smiling!

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  7. Thank goodness, indeed, for our garbagemen!
    Really liked these poems. :)

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  8. A retreating garbageman would leave you in an awkward, if not smelly, situation!

    Afternoon Retreat

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